Sugar Coated
 

come on....
I do a open mic like every 2 days
somebody nominate me
for the open mic award for one of them...
I do this because of my Love of rap
but I would love an award please LOL

ok pease READ IT ALL!!!


ALL this is True I never Lie in my Lyrics at ALL



Attention America!!!!

you have been told Various Lies
I'm sure to most of you this note
has not at all taken you by surprise

we should realise we're not perfect
for our sake the countries actions
multiple times have been sugar coated
We hear speeches in meatings...
told by congress claiming they have wrote it
but has been written and used in the past
Bush I caught using his old Fathers Mess (true)
Bush isn't the worst, I Caught John Kerry
who has told many lies to the press...

he claims that with War he is not involved...
but even the records proved and implied
he served time in Vietnam!!and he Indueced
pain onto civillians who weren't a threat
no guns held,he killed all foregins
even ones who shown no disrespect (true)

Let's shift over to the Media...
False News isn't exclusive to Globe (tabloits)
they said the Governer Of my state
shown that the NCAA meatings
are repeatedly Postponed....though
he told during the Debates..he states:
"Rob is not one to let the races wait" (real quote)
I don't Hate but to him, I show no praise
because my school books are no way up to date
How do a school like mine hold
the same books for over a decade?(true)

Even Rappers like us...have flaws...in fact...
Snoop Dogg calimed he takes his movies
more to heart then taking part of his rap!!!
whic heart me Deeply...I been buying his cd's...
Bow the boy sweeter then Diabeties :laugh: (true)


Now it becomes aparent...that this country is Bearin
the most people in the state of not Caring...
the world hasn't changed I still face Store clerks staring
so pretty much, our quote "in GOD we trust"
it's like we're arguing with the bible
so we're only "with GOD we Fuss


ok this is my 5th open mic I think...
also my 2nd this week
Let's get some crits...
I try not to rap about guns,smoking
of any mainstream crap
but me doing that is my downfall
becuase I get the least crits....

please please please

i'm sorry aint dissin nobody or doing a collb
or talkin about guns and shit

but damn can I please get a crit pleeeeeaas?

puhleeeeeeaaase
crit b4 the mods close this
due to inactivity

sees you're criting everything BUT my open mics

why?

wow still no feedback.........

I'll reurn the favor

I us don't want this to go to waste :(

I must be e 1st dude t Up
4 times without getting no feedback wat-so-ever...

I jus loss all momentem in RV right now


crit if you want

in 20 min. I would like the mods to close this

damn

even the niggas i'm coo with aint crit for shit

fuck this
even without crits i'm still gon' print


peace

yo mods close this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!

I wanna spit another one

and this gettin slept on BAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

fuck that lol

yo i worked hard on this shit so
somebody crit this pleaaaasse

<~~~awaits for 100 more open mics or done b4 anyone crits

peace

uppin


no one has upped this much b4

so plz crit

yo this drop was good......nice to see a change from guns n bitches to something of a little more relevance.... i can tell u put a lot of time into this, atleast i thought it was interesting i think it payed off.

Wasnt Really Feeling It I Hate Politics It Was Ok I Guess But I Just Aint Really Like It It Aint Flow Consitent At All And Well I Didnt Like It At All No Hate Just A Honest Opion

^is cool

but all of it wasn't about poiltics
I got on snoop in there too
and others


peace