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oreo vs Street poet
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-22-04 at 10:49 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
oreo has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-19-04 10:50 PM.
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Street poet has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-19-04 11:08 PM.
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verse,
you 9 and 1, im 0 and 2, ive lost to a couple but not one by you, its true even under your name you a light wieght and yet, you a street poet but spit over the internet, now you can flo with out trying to catch your breath, but if i put you lungs in your hand would you catch a breath, you say you got a hot battle with shootaboy but i rode on his crew and and he isnt as hot as you think boy, so if that battle hot then this is blazin yo, you a grape with a dreid flow, so better yet you a rasin hoe,(dried grapes are rasins) im ill with it, almost dislexic, but if i ate of your words, id be anerexic, you scared to tell where you from cuz other brothas might you it against you, none of you lines be on piont like the tip of an unsharpened pencil, your shit stinks,flow broken up like nsync, i think, my flow is cold enough to make you tiny dick shrink, i bet no gurl would ever hit that cuz your hair line is like fat joe all it does is lean bak, my woms are bout to stak up like pringles, and now your record nout to look worst then the bengals, this myy verse yall |
verse,
you 9 and 1, im 0 and 2, ive lost to a couple but not one by you, its true even under your name you a light wieght and yet, you a street poet but spit over the internet, now you can flo with out trying to catch your breath, but if i put you lungs in your hand would you catch a breath, you say you got a hot battle with shootaboy but i rode on his crew and and he isnt as hot as you think boy, so if that battle hot then this is blazin yo, you a grape with a dreid flow, so better yet you a rasin hoe,(dried grapes are rasins) im ill with it, almost dislexic, but if i ate of your words, id be anerexic, you scared to tell where you from cuz other brothas might you it against you, none of you lines be on piont like the tip of an unsharpened pencil, your shit stinks,flow broken up like nsync, i think, my flow is cold enough to make you tiny dick shrink, i bet no gurl would ever hit that cuz your hair line is like fat joe all it does is lean bak, my woms are bout to stak up like pringles, and now your record nout to look worst then the bengals, this myy verse yall |
oero u'll neva going to win an battle like da bengals neva going to get an championship ring so bitch step down or get creamed//
yo rhymes wouldnt shine if u dyed yo hair plantium like sisco i dont know why u accpet dis battle ur going to lose nympho iam going to bruise u so bad i make u go to yo profile and get dat band-aid dat u have ,--dont go against me or ur willing to dig yo own grave,my rhymes so electric iam sendin shock-waves through ur brain// Whoa~! ur think u going to win naw its da opposite like jewish celebrating christimas on holidays// i'll punch u so hard i make u go to daemergency help center u be in der for days// Afta da battle u be going to FAQ ask why u lost to poet its ova damn it~! It's the end kid, arrange-a-start, like a "finale of X-Files" we'll watch the "strange-depart"/... Pains-an-art, cut him so hes outta blood.. play-ya-part & watch "Slim in a transplant" get a "change-of-heart"!!// Insane, I-deplete-your-health, learn to admit-defeat-yourself/... State-n-speak-of-wealth but you make music for "dropouts at the library" cos your shit would "fail-to-leave-the-shelf"!!// You're bluffing-just-take-it, I'll eat this emcee while stuffing-my-face-in/... Just like a world of parodies speaking reverse order: "nothing-is-Sacred"!!// Your education is modest but the lesson-is-basic/... Steppin?-just-face-it.. a lack of self esteem got your "head hanging so low" you "requested-a-face-lift"!// Shit's-insane, I got you "seeing stars" like "premiere screenings" cos you wanted glitz-n-fame/... Spit-to-gain, you're a faggot suckin so much dick you put Jay-Z's lips-to-shame!!// ^^^^------------------------------------------------------------flatlined bitch |
Voted For: Street poet
SP: all hands down no competition, win goes to Street Poet. he started off weak, but then just hit the throttle. sp tore this hit up with good structure, great wordplay, great meat's, hot punches, ok personals, and godly multi's. Oreo: is that really a verse, 5 words, either ur really dumb or u really suck, elevate on every level. vote: Street Poet return honest votes - Quick Witted vs Mc Prephickz, Quick Witted vs Certifiedthug, Quick Witted vs Upfront, Quick Witted vs CFA Stunna1, Quick Witted vs Logical"Lyrickz Removed.. oreo posted in wrong spot |
oops, oreo
my bad oreo, my cpu messed up and only showed that u had five words. anyways ya structure was good, everything else u could elevate on. SP still get's this in my eyes
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naw you cool quikie, you should come to the nati and hear me preform with my group
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This was feedback posted for Street poet
its kinda obvious who won this battle..even though oreos line was real hard i think that street poet took this one, stuff messed oreo, just says "you gioing first or me" haha
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hey this is fucked up how you caint red my sy shit i didnt even put that in there it was in the boottom where it said dont post your verse here
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Voted For: Street poet
lmao comon now we know who won this battle i aint even gotta say it these niggas know lol |
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verse, you 9 and 1, im 0 and 2, ive lost to a couple but not one by you, its true even under your name you a light wieght and yet, you a street poet but spit over the internet, now you can flo with out trying to catch your breath, but if i put you lungs in your hand would you catch a breath, you say you got a hot battle with shootaboy but i rode on his crew and and he isnt as hot as you think boy, so if that battle hot then this is blazin yo, you a grape with a dreid flow, so better yet you a rasin hoe,(dried grapes are rasins) im ill with it, almost dislexic, but if i ate of your words, id be anerexic, you scared to tell where you from cuz other brothas might you it against you, none of you lines be on piont like the tip of an unsharpened pencil, your shit stinks,flow broken up like nsync, i think, my flow is cold enough to make you tiny dick shrink, i bet no gurl would ever hit that cuz your hair line is like fat joe all it does is lean bak, my woms are bout to stak up like pringles, and now your record nout to look worst then the bengals, this myy verse yall __________________ how you gonna make it as a rapper if yo scared of this cracker? [SIZE=7] jion the movement /organized sound/ cant stop wont stop |
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