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Str8_hood vs Spektikul
Topical Battle Rules:
20 line minimum No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Recycling No bullshit 3 days to check-in, 45 min after check in to drop Topic will be Domestic Violence, GL... Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 09-23-04 at 07:50 PM Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in. Closed by request.. did not meet 20 line minimum |
Spektikul has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-21-04 02:16 AM.
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Domestic Violence Why'd this have to happen, Im too upset to even think I went out with all my friends, to the bar to get a drink One drink quickly turned, into maybe three or four Now my life is ruined, and my family is no more When I went home that night, she was sitting up in bed She asked where the hell I was, and I dont know what said All I know is a was drunk, and getting very mad and pissed My face started sweating, and I started squeezing my fist "What the hells with you bitch, you got a fuckin problem?" I took the belt off my pants, and told her I could solve'em I whipped her so bad, that bitch could hardly walk "honey please! Cant we just sit down and talk" "Shut up whore, you dont even deserve to be here no more" I slid out a dresser drawer, and threw it though our closet door I jumped on the bed, said "I'll smack you in the head" "Kill you bout four times, before your even fucking dead" I bruised and bloodied up her face, she said "your being violent" Then for a moment, while I was beating her, she became silent At the door stood a scared boy, she was looking at our son "What are you looking at ho?", then I reached for my gun I threw her on the floor, and she let out this screaming yelp But when I looked in my son's eyes, thats when I knew I needed help This is no example to set, I thought that I could act bigger I slowly moved my gun away, but already pulled the trigger Painted the room red, realizing that she'd died Turned my head to my son, he just ran away and cried Ive gotten help, but I wish I would have done it sonner tho The judge let me outta jail, just to be at her funeral I look back on what I did, what was I ever mad at, not sure I think I was stressed out, and took my anger out on her Although that wasn't the first time, I know that its the last Only thing I have to remember, are the memories in the past Alcohol led me, to these domestic violence scars Now Im litterally back to where it all started, "behind bars" |
uppin for Hood to not forget about this battle....
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str8_hood has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-22-04 09:31 PM.
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alright
i could hear the screams from the room man this kids bawling broken down inside from the pain and the name calling cant take it no more his family's foolish, they abuse him callin him things like stupid cause they think their kid is useless he can hear his parents arguing he goes in his room and tells god the faint sound of his dad hitting his mom o wont u help mom no on hears his cries, so its killin him inside 16 years of his life he's been putting up with this violence his father yells at him and tells him forget the belt look at the bruises and the welts, just imagine the hurt he felt try to hide his scars by covering up with more clothes he feels lonely in this world simply because no one else knows what happens when he leaves school and goes home gettin beat from his father feels like he cant go on wants to let somebody know but he cant because he's scared that if his dad found he spoke up its gon happen again so folks dont rely on punching your kid if youre tryin to discipline them hitting them with your fists cant beat righteousness in them |
ha ha i forgot a bar . o well uppin 4 votes
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Voted For: str8_hood
aight i liked both, str8s aint really rhymed that much, but it still was pretty good, u know a child puttin up wit violence, Spektikul i liked ur verse but since there is a topical, u went of at some point, of course yeah u had domestic violence but tha main topic was drikinin and shit. Drop an honest vote on my battles (sig). Peace. |
well my topical was about domestic violence, but all domestic violence cases have to have a source/reasoning for the abuse, in this case it was alcohol that led to it, its kool tho i hear what ya mean, uppinn...
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