just alittle sleepy thoughts
 

so far away
im sorry for what i did
i know that it would happen again
if given the chance
yet i am sorry
for the pain and sorrew

is it greed?
is it hate?
is it me?

cant be me
i dont want that

i am about freedom
i am about power
i am about love

but why did this happen?
is it my sub?
is it my true?


give me feed back, i wanna know what yall think (1st thread) and i read a few others and they were pretty good. well good nite.

nice poem, i like the way it flows and is set up differently from from others, i like that, nice job