teken. vs Intellekt
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

good luck...

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-24-04 at 11:27 AM

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teken. has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-21-04 11:28 AM.

Intellekt has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-21-04 11:41 AM.

i'm "intellekt"ual, stab you in "your neck" and you'll
act like a retard, fingers fucked up you'll start to drool
ill give you a "stroke of genious" with a swift back hand
cut off your tongue so your food starts to taste bland
on the mic imma "genius", i write rhymes for "einstein"
this rookies "rhymes" are predictable i can tell line by "line"
ill saw through your head and leave it stuck half way,
the only way you get rhymes is through the bank, you pay
your a homo who likes to spend quality time with "boys"
playing with dirty "toys" trying not to make a loud "noise"

ill nurture this kid but not how mother nature would//
but infect and defect this mind like no Satan could//
maybe shoulda got ur posts up, maybe u shoulda bit//
no matter, i spit clean, maybe even make ur clothes fit//
ill kill u for naming urself after a fighting game, such a shame//
elementary lines bully this kid off this sites mainframe//
im the ill rhyme slayer ultimate spine breaker...
this pussy wouldnt fuck with me if i was a vibrator!!

yo learn how to spell.............. its genius

upppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

and lighten up will ya....(name)

uppin 4 votes......................................

Voted For: teken.

i'm "intellekt"ual, stab you in "your neck" and you'll
act like a retard, fingers fucked up you'll start to drool
^^^^^^^^^ LOL RETARD LOL NICE PUNCH

ill give you a "stroke of genious" with a swift back hand
cut off your tongue so your food starts to taste bland
on the mic imma "genius", i write rhymes for "einstein"
this rookies "rhymes" are predictable i can tell line by "line"
^^^^^^^^^^ YOO GOOD PUNCHES MAYNE KEEP HITTIN IT

ill saw through your head and leave it stuck half way,
the only way you get rhymes is through the bank, you pay
your a homo who likes to spend quality time with "boys"
playing with dirty "toys" trying not to make a loud "noise"
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD CLOSA AND AN PUNCH



ill nurture this kid but not how mother nature would//
but infect and defect this mind like no Satan could//
maybe shoulda got ur posts up, maybe u shoulda bit//
no matter, i spit clean, maybe even make ur clothes fit//
^^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD FLOW BUT WASNT HITTING HARD ENOUGH

ill kill u for naming urself after a fighting game, such a shame//
elementary lines bully this kid off this sites mainframe//
im the ill rhyme slayer ultimate spine breaker...
this pussy wouldnt fuck with me if i was a vibrator!!
^^^^^^^^^^^^^AIGHT U GOT GOOD CLOSA AND GOOD FLOW BUT DA PUNCHES WASNT HITTIN HARDA

YO KEEP I THINK TEKEN WON DIS BECUZ OF HARDER PUNCHES AND

INT KEEP IT UP BUT BRING PUNCHES TO DA TABLE NEXT TIME MAYNE//

V-TEKEN BECUZ OF HARDA PUNCHES

Voted For: teken.

i vote fo tek
better punchl;ines, better flo also
well dun m8 keep it up

yo uppin for votes stop sleepin n start votin...

aight uppin stop slepi ya'll all votes will be returned just leave a link...

This was feedback posted for teken.
 

nice structure and flow in this, try and direct your punches at the other person more and try and get some more personals in your verses. good job.

uppin for votes... votes will be returned leave a link