Lil Rip vs sHoTTaBoY
 

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Topical Battle

Topic Is........''A Bad Day''..

My First Topical! :help:

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Check in by: 09-24-04 at 12:09 PM

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sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-21-04 12:13 PM.

Lil Rip has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-21-04 12:14 PM.

woke up this morning smoke a blunt, and i'm felling right//
put on the pimp gear so i be looking tight//
my bro crunk up tha lac and lean back//
told me to pull up my pants, cause he didn't want to see my crack//
he was my only brother, he show me much love//
be he hated that i live like my life like a thug//
pull up at the school and told me to do all my work//
got out the car sag my pants and unbotten my shirt//
my bro got out of the car, then hit me in front of my boys//
got in my face and we talk some noise//
what i said next makes me cry//
i said "FUCK YOU I HATE YOU NKOW GO DIE"//
with a shock look he rode away//
I thought how i was going to say i'm sorry all day//
but my mom was crying when i got home//
then i found out my bro took my gun and blow off his dome//
that was two years ago, and i still lay at night and cry//
cause i didn't get to say i'm sorry, i love you, or GOODBYE//

TRUE STORY

Okay, This My First Topical..
Okay, Okay, Whassup?!

I'm Havin A ''Bad Day''..
It Seems Like The World Never Shows A Brother Any ''Leighway''..
Its Like I'm Stuck On The ''Highway'' Goin The ''Wrong Way'' This World Got Me Wantin To ''Runaway''..
My Emotions Are On ''Display'' Everythingsa Got Me Wantin Too ''Get Away'' Go On ''Holiday'' n Never Come ''Back''...
This All Sorted Cause My Girl Told Me To ''Never Come Back'' Then Slammed The Door After She Gave Me A ''Smack''..!
So I Walked Outside Only To Find Some ''Maniac''..
Slashin At My Tired n Turnin The Car From ''Cherry Red To Black''..
So Then I Walked To School Only To ''Find''...
I Forgot Bout The ''Mid-Terms'' That Were ''Preassigned''..
I Didnt Study, I Found The Test Too ''Hard''...
Screamed Out ''Wont This Day Just End Please God''..!
So This The Story Of My ''Bad Luck''...
The World Can Leave You ''Stuck'' But Thats Why We Goin Around Not Givin A ''Fuck''..!

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By The Way, That Shits A TRUE STORY, So I Thought I'd Put It InTo Rhymes, An I Felt Like Smackin A Bitch On That Particular Day