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Rip (Cho-Kahn MiWang) Feat. SenseR - Todays Man
this is a hot concept so for sure i asked my man rip if i could hop on this joint wit'em and i produced it..so sit back and listen to our deep messages..iight 1ne..
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/c...miwangmusic.htm Rip Verse 1ne my blood alchahol content is unfeesable toxins spill out my feet n shoes till my sox smell like dead ppl do so forgive me,if my speech is slewed wen i speak to you fuck i can barley think my brain is lost burnt cells show u can't train my thoughts i died in pacin don't think before actions cuz my mind is racing n i can't catch em inta fasious fashion cuz jay-Z sold me,the shit whle rappin i'm not a bad guy,bitches talk fly, n i smack em,i'm jus reactin the way that they,told me i should be actin' HIV n other shit i should be catchin' to erase the ways,the good was lackin' stuck in war,kid u would b packin' n it here now,how bush would have it i got a record,cuz i couldnt hack it in real life,whats good with tragic we life in a world,were u look at faggots it's cool,for u to live next to one but what about the day,he effects your son what defines closed minded? maby i am biggot what hapopen to morals that we usta live wit whats todays man supposed to look like you may be alive,but they took your life i still kill with these skils that dolllas crushed wen we state in god we trust my consience content takes a back seat to the obvious jibber jabber the hidden factors that diddnt matter cuz kids is actors like fuck intelegent rapppers with relevent subject matter what possess you to resort to retort with laungage of this sort' i smack bitches till my wrist hurt but changt change their trian of thought thse dames is lost but i maintain at all cost Chorus SenseR x2 Whats todays man supposed to look like// maybe your alive but they took ya life// Rip x2 Whats todays man supposed to look like// maybe your alive but they took ya life// SenseR so whats todays man supposed to look like a bush rosey// that'll kill ya explosively, then tax you furiously??// man the mold of me, is similiar to a delinger// sinister when ever i spit at cha literture givin ya// no chance of livin like when cancer has risen in ya moms tit// man thats what i lived but i thank god it// wasnt serious but urgently forced under go surgery// if it would of murdered her it would of murdered me// like burns third degree, i'll put flames in ya ass// like them jews in the past// but i didnt viewed it and laughed it was way too harsh// razor sharp in my mind lazers sparked// major parts of this life of mine// i've felt spikes in my spine cuz despite some of my// friends was just really after my ends// so they had to pretend to be close// shit now they gonna meet the toast// my cnotes rightfully belong to me// this song is deep and hot like sonnas be// just look whos on the beat its rip and sense// shit get tense when clips dispense we hit the fence// and fall to floor why brawl through a war// send a call to the lord cuz we all finna fall// under evil some deciteful numbed wit needles// we dont gotta have guns they lethal// todays man is who ever sonned his seed through// this world thats a demon that has come to eat chu// girls turn to women and some will need you// but hurl on they denim and some will leave you// c'mon people talkin... Chorus SenseR x2 Whats todays man supposed to look like// maybe your alive but they took ya life// Rip x2 Whats todays man supposed to look like// maybe your alive but they took ya life// Rips 2nd Verse. man,shits fucked,can see the pain in my face whats a good life,explain how it taste plant seeds in astrial planes,but my grains laid to waste scream fuck the world,i snatched her purse,but diddnt rape mother earth i was framed in this case,weres the evedence,try ta find a trace my brains deranged,from doin more lines then bass eva dropped,theirs not a drug i never copped but like hippies turned yuppies,gone to cop at leather shops im mearly unactive it's,a safe bet rip will never stop my brains melodic,i think in rhymes it's common logic,were just a blink in time u only think trash,ice sex n cash,so i dump out thats why i'll be here,long after they burn the sun out long after the oil supply run out,long after mr jacksons closet action come out think what u sung about and what your sons about my words are immortial,they will remember me im type i'll,n theirs no remedy ppl temptin me,wish i had a little record,like a mp3 but shit gets a little hectic,so i empty 3 for real,look brotha you only think you could love her turned your babies mother cuz u wouldnt hit it with a rubber so your stuck with a insignifacnt other Hook authentic intelegence,we speek truth// subjects stay relevent,belive news// even when hella bent neva recive boo's// u jus spew trash for the hell of it,desised dudes... Chorus SenseR x2 Whats todays man supposed to look like// maybe your alive but they took ya life// Rip x2 Whats todays man supposed to look like// maybe your alive but they took ya life// holla 1ne... |
yea... i was feelin this track.. fa sho..
CHO: ya quality was a lil iffy hehe.. u clipped a few here and there... i thought ya flow coulda been a lil better... but over all the verse was aiight.... i liek the beat tho....loved the beat...i can see my self spittin over that shit... good beat choice senser: was feelin it... flow was on point for the most part.. not much i can say.. i was really feelin it.. i wanna collab on a track with you.. nothing in mind yet... but ima get at you.. |
iight man just holla at me..when you got somethin in mind..i havent done some grimey street shit in a minute so if you find a beat somewhat like that holla at me man..1ne..
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i liked this shit....
good spread on the topics touched- cho-kahn got some sick lyrics its gonna be nice to see when you get more comfortable with a mic... senser flowed all over the beat- it was a nice meshin here... ez. |
yeah man thats what i was feelin..good looks on the feed seven...ayo..anyone out there knows any soundclick page that might have some grimey beat for downloadin...cuz im in need of a grimey beat yo..iight holla at me..1ne
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thx bro,
yea this track is deff nice,1st track i've ever had produced LOL big thx to SenseR 4 hookin that shit up |
Word this was nice done by both. Not same quality but was aight i have to say.
Cho....A.I Fam Sens...u need to get at a crew fam..A.I..lol |
this is a dope track its hot playa good job
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*listening*
I'm feeling the beat....Rip came in A tad loud......just didn't sound right at first, volume was cool for the rest of the verse. Some of your dubs were off. You mumbled through a line or two, but not bad from start to finish......Chorus was cool. Actually sounded like a chorus....lol. Senser came in better than Rip did....just sounded smoother. Flow was cool. I'm feeling the lyrics from both. Quality was pretty good from Senser too....Came in a little better on the third verse. Flow was off at the beginning though. I think you clipped a couple times too.....:nono: You seemed like you tried to fit too many words in one line a couple times....I have the same problem. Keep droppin :thumbup: |
^^ i know,i got a prob w that shit LoL 2 much to say in 2 lil time i guess...
thx for the feedback ppls i'll b sure to hit back |
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