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shake-spear 09-22-04 02:01 AM

reply to ::WE::UN::TOUCHABLE
 
*DV looks through the crowd and see no opposing crews but when DV and his group of bitches go too walk off the stage they see a man sittin in the shadows leaning back in his chair wit his feet on the table his fitted was low so they didnt know who he was. He slams the shot glass down stands up and grabs da mic.*

Shake-Spear: if yall only knew

HA HA mutha fuckas yall forgot one person/
he's diverse wit a verse so ull die first if u verse him/
it was all a diversion the worst one was the one yall least expect/
he's in the back of ya head till the heats at the back of ya neck/
and hes askin who next/
betta hope ya have on a vest/
look ill give yall a last request the mac or the tek/
ill take ya wifes take ya lifes i aint leavin u much/
fuckin wit MK u must not like breathin to much/
so y yall talkin "trash" when half of yall are wut u talkin/
if u n i verse"(universe)" the votes wont be "parralyl" cause mine aint "parkin"/
id scortch yall and start a "wildfire" but im "mad dog" ya-mans-wack/
"phantom" needs to stick to opera and who knew saraan-(w)raps/
talkin bout we need a cleenex look everyone saraans a comic/
cause u soft as charmen and stay gettin shitted on....how ironic/
i leave the crowd astonished cause i dont put up wit shit from wack-herbs/
"Mad dog" so wack he wouldnt get a "God dam" if his name was backwords/
so go head and laugh-first cause im gettin the last-laugh/
Phantom's jus a (fan)phan-to-m:e matter of fact a stan-to-me/
so dont try to stand-to-me cause ull jus be handin-me/
the win..........and if not ima take it by force/
and i dont gotta spit "wild fire" to take on some whores/

*Shake-spear drops da mic as it catches fire the mic lands in some spilt alchohal and the club begins to burn down shake slowly turns and walks out the front door while the flames press against his back. no one knows wut happened to A.I.* :gfy:

shake-spear 09-22-04 02:05 AM

iight i jus had to do this cause yall said some shit bout MK and i had to reply even know this might get me kicked out the crew cause i aint tell no one i was gon do it and i know its not that good but i jus wrote it in like 30-45 mins lol the original ::WE::UN::TOUCHABLE:: was prolly betta but wuteva hope yall like

Logic The Goonie 09-22-04 02:13 AM

not as good as ours, but it had its moments. you will get the respect for bein so bold as to fire back, and thnx for usin those personals on me cuz now nobody can use it in a battle, ill say.....7/10

honestly, and DV wont trip i dont think.....

shake-spear 09-22-04 02:16 AM

lol iight fam good lookin and yea i know ya shit was betta

La Cosa Nostra 09-22-04 02:35 AM

*Cough* Didnt read it.. But it was a diss to AI so it must be wack *cough*

50Cal. 09-22-04 02:42 AM

that shit was fucking dope as fuck sun the wordplay on the names was off the fucking meter that shit was fucking dope it started good and built up to fire dope fucking shit a 10/10 just on how you worked the names alone is a 11/10 damn sun fucking dope shit :thumbup:

shake-spear 09-22-04 12:27 PM

good lookin son thnx for the feedback fam

Key... 09-22-04 02:39 PM

U tried homey...Shake..lol

Ice Pick 09-22-04 02:45 PM

I thought it was good

THOSE IN AI

WELL of course their gonna sat its wack, well ya know what

IT WAS PRETTY DAMN GOOD FROM WHAT I SEEN

PHANTOM OPERA

I WOULD HAVE USED THAT IN OUR BATTLE BUT I DIDNT, Cause i thought it might have been played out>>>>>

THATS WAS FUCKIN FUNNY

DV8 09-22-04 04:13 PM

nice dawg-fam aint gonna kick ya out 4 that, shit was good....
damn you even made me laugh....props shake spear....keep it up,you rep well..!

shake-spear 09-22-04 04:32 PM

iight fam good lookin still lokin for feedback

~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~ 09-22-04 05:12 PM

HA HA mutha fuckas yall forgot one person/
he's diverse wit a verse so ull die first if u verse him/
it was all a diversion
thos multis/\/\/\ in ya opener hot as phuck
i enjoyed the name and word play....
keep eleva tin and we could see a rematch...lol i remember....

8.9/10 fire........and even better the shit was quik...........30 minutes and all that u really stepped up much respect....keep doin it big....peace fam

[.:D:.] 09-22-04 05:33 PM

hot shit fam....reppin Mindz Kollide good....o yea...B-More stand up too

shake-spear 09-22-04 05:35 PM

lol yea dats right son B-MORE stand up iight good lookin on the feedback


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