Demons In My Mind (RATE 1-10)
 

im "forever seein" these"demons-in-my-mind"
"releasin the heat" through completeness,as if "hell was my rhymes"
"rewindin time",seein the reasons that "made Christ cry"
"believe not what ya believein" but me-atleast "hear my side"
cause its "hard to imagine" the "strength of the tide"
the "waves of existence" consistantly "fillin up in my eyes"
"let em drop" to realize the severing "pain of our time"
"bombing others" for peace-to try stop "suicide crimes"
"political lies" all the time severin "critical ties"
"assassination of assassins" prohibit what they "call pro life"
"front line" barely reachin an age of "above one-nine"
"a heartless sign" get off the grind-realize and "restart ya minds"
its "time to climb" a reachless peak like "above my high"
put "the trees aside" ima speak my piece and then ill "let it ride"
and "hope it collides" with the confines "of feelins inside"
cause were "killin our spine" backin out-lettin "death dealers decide"
who "lost in their pride"-to win would wage-the "cost of lives"
"no need to describe" you can catch it right "on cnn tonight"
this "race aint right" despite our might "as humans we fight"
its "time to unite" together as people yall "one love-goodnight"

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damn

yo nigga tight flow.....................7/10

yo that was nice, it kida has a jadakiss (why) feeling to it, u had some nice multi's and it flowed great, 9.5/10, u wanna do a collabo, check my open mic "it's real"

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good message nigga, flowed together real nice man, and like dude said it did have a jadakiss type feel to it. nice shit dawg 8/10

thanx yall...mos def appriciate the feed back...1

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feed on mine and when i read the feed ill go directly to your most recent posts- check them out-and give feed...1

waddup sounds good n was easy to read

yeah thanx^^^^that lil shit you had was hot also...1



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