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Yvonne vs Hypnotist
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6 - Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting check in when u ready...and gd luck u aint owning me son :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-26-04 at 10:20 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Yvonne has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-23-04 10:21 AM.
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Hypnotist has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-23-04 10:21 AM.
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I never knew hypnotised kids could lick a chicks clit
Becareful how u spit cos my busting u aint gon b sweet How the fuck u think to own me,when ur’mind’is collided* You still wouldn’t rock a mic bitch,even if u pre-wrote&recited** 6 lines cos u handy,dats y ur punches miss n hitting it sided** *hes in mind collide…collide means to come into conflict…so if his mind is in conflict how the fuck he think to own me? **that means to rehearse **handy = handiucapped…usually handicaps got their mouth shifted to the side..and so his punches miss..they aint touching me.. vote on this and we will vote on urs….dats a promise holla |
hurry the fuck up...............
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Ok right here is where you realise that the time stops..
Bcus i wake you from a sleep.. And ishatter your dreams of winning just like alarm clockz.. Face it, your a slut, your style sucks like airducts.. Ill make you "throw in the towel", like Arabs before haircuts.. Your even reppin KOK.so my dick already has you hypnotised.. You spit ice and I spit fire so.. Im gona melt you and freeze you just so i can murk you twice.. Owned by a N00b. |
Voted For: Hypnotist
Hynotis gets my vote Ok right here is where you realise that the time stops.. Bcus i wake you from a sleep.. And ishatter your dreams of winning just like alarm clockz.. This was prett good descent punch Face it, your a slut, your style sucks like airducts.. Ill make you "throw in the towel", like Arabs before haircuts.. This was a fuckin riot and a good punch Your even reppin KOK.so my dick already has you hypnotised.. You spit ice and I spit fire so.. Im gona melt you and freeze you just so i can murk you twice.. not bad and pretty creative never knew hypnotised kids could lick a chicks clit Becareful how u spit cos my busting u aint gon b sweet didnt ryme and had no point How the fuck u think to own me,when ur’mind’is collided* You still wouldn’t rock a mic bitch,even if u pre-wrote&recited** This was pretty good 6 lines cos u handy,dats y ur punches miss n hitting it sided** should have had another line to go with this one NO HATE JUST FACTS HYP TOOK THIS Hit this up http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=151053 |
Voted For: Hypnotist
Hypno got this............ much more complex verse, an ya opener didnt even rhyme yvonne, ya came weak as fuck in this battle, hypno dropped a decent verse, the basttle didnt have any hard hittin punches, the metas n humour wasnt there either... both elevate, but on the whole hypno had the better verse, cause his/her stuff actually rhymed...... |
ill hit that link up in a while Ice Pick.
Leave Links People :). |
Voted For: Hypnotist
yo you got this... i liked your verse alot better and was funny... yvonne yours was aight but i wasn't feelin it as much as hyps aight peace no hate keep elevatin ya'll... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
yo i forgot repay the favour link in the sig.... p e a c e !
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Uppin i will hit up all links.
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This was feedback posted for Yvonne
yvonne gets this fo sho...
cos she came up harder...her structure was better and her verse was flowing better than hypnotist...her wordplay and personals were decent too...gd job... hypnostist... in ur whole verse u had only one punch thats the arab line and that shit was fucked up ...ur structure was fucked up 2 it aint bout structure here >>> all bout the punches....i mean ur verse was slacking...lack of wordplay and personals......1.....just work on ur skills.. peace.. |
yo i made a mistake
didn't wanted to post a feedback wanted to drop a vote pz |
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