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Ice Pick 09-23-04 11:27 AM

Hottest diss in open mic LONG BUT WORTH IT
 
Instigating a Battle's like Massaging a Rabbit’s Foot, coz ya Pressin' ya Luck,
Ya Essence-is-Fucked Coz ya Couldn't Get into Gear if it Meant Depressing-the-Clutch,
U ain’t Impressin-me-Much, ya Callin' the Shots and my Bullets Wanna Meet-ya-in-Person,
I'll Stampede-on-ya-Verse-then, Show ya the Real ICE PICK-Version
U Remind me of Australian Hair Care Recipes coz you're the Product of Gel-Aussie (JEALOUSY)
I’ll Settle you, With a BLAZING JOINT with Enough Heat, it’s MELTING-your-KNEES (get it?)
FUCKIN-with-Me? U Should Practice CELIBACY, in this Serenade while I Tear-ya-Brains…
Til ya DESPERATELY CALL FOR JESUS coz you’re BEGGING to get-A-PRAISE
And ya Destined Famed? my Name and Image ain't for Sale, and this ain’t no Free-Trial!
Shit, You’re Fuckin Pathetic and should FORGET about FLOWIN like when the Alzheimer’s See-Nile(river)
I Breathe-Bile, The MCs on ya Board Knows I'm Tighter-then-Most, Simply Mightier-then-Foes,
This Writer’s-Dethroned, and ya Remind me of Modelin Crucifixes, coz this FAGGOTS X-Posed
Why you Trying-to-Pose? ya Couldn’t have ya LINES MEAT like GRAPHING-VEGETARIANS!!
With the Madness-of-a-Terrorist I’m Bashin-on-ya-Arrogance,
& the Wack-Shit-You’ve-Inherited
Coz Battling me is Crafted-by-ya-Carelessness…

DIE.

I'll Pierce the Sword-in-ya-Cheeks, to Gourge-ya-Physique in this Formid-able-Siege
Ur Horribly-Weak, coz Last Time I Checked Wack Cats Were Overrunnin ya so called Immortal-Emceez!
This Whore-is-Geek, and ya Been Caught-as-Fake-Man with ya Soft-and-Lame-Raps,
You’re Unknown, Knowing my Name Alone could’ve got ya an ya crew
in some heat for mentioning me JACK! (sorry)
The only Impersonators Reside in their own minds, But I’m Tryna Keep the Modesty when I Rock-the-Keys,
I’m Psychotically on a Chaotic Spree, while ya Can’t Keep ya Mouth Shut like Faucet-Leaks,
Thought ya was on the TOP of the FOOD CHAIN by Sittin on Sausage-Links! (lol)
And Honestly, Challengin me Means NO Common Sense like Usin PESOS for American-Currency!
Unworthy-Frees, ya Could Write ya Out Dated Verses in Waves, but they ain’t CURRENT-SEE?
It’s a Murdering, I’ll Use a Scalpel-to-Purge-him, and If a Battle’s-to-Worship,
Then this Verse is MOLESTIN this KID Worser then R-KELLY & PRIESTS in CATHOLIC CHURCHES!
So now ya Phallus-is-Serviced, what made ya Think We Could Share Verses? And Vice-Verse?
I’ll Slash the Books of Philosophers, and Proceed to RIP thru Wise-Wordz!
Wasn’t Even a Good Try-Herb, ya Could Never Taint this Winner’s-Rep and I’ll make Bitch of-Your-Text,
Without any Interest… the MC’s of RV should List me in the TOP 30 Emcees on the INTERNET!





Lynched-to-Death, and Make Sure You Feel Every Nylon Thread that’ll Pinch-your-Neck,
You Ain’t a Hint-of-Vet, but Heard-the-Best, who Serve’s-the-NET Worser then the Laker’s-Did
I’ll Run Thru ya Crib, so , and Embrace-ya-wig coz I'm Laced-with-Scripts,
Ya Lost-and-It's-Tragic, so what does this Anal Rippage Cost-to-this-Faggot?
Fact is, he Thought we were PITCHING LETTUCES, coz He's Interested in TOSSING-Some-SALAD...


DIE.


This Sleazy-Whore’s-Lame, with Lungs Searchin For Recognition He’s Breathing-for-Fame
Being-this-Great, Often Attract’s Opposite as Magnetic-Pulls, so get off ya Pedistol,
PICKS Skill Remain’s Plentiful, While You HEADLINE MOCKERY coz ya Subject-to-Redicule
WHEN HE see's this here are the Remarks of this Headless-Fool”



OUCH
I HOPE YOU SEE THIS

Introspect. 09-23-04 11:30 AM

fuckin dope...yo check D2R's forum we hella tight join da crew dawg mass represent...

Scenario 09-23-04 11:42 AM

that was some hot shit, godly meta's, ya got a nice crew going croation but anyways ice pick that's a 10/10, any of u two wanna collab, check out my open mic "it's real"

SenesIzIt 09-23-04 12:56 PM

whoa...thats shit was fire man...lots of goodies...definately a lil long but it was worth it...1

Kayem 09-23-04 01:12 PM

... Yeah That Was Hot Shit There iCE, U Should Really Check Out D2R ...

Ice Pick 09-23-04 03:17 PM

Word

Thatnks Fo The Feed

Sorry About The Length I Had To Vent

Artemis 09-23-04 03:41 PM

lines were aiight, flow was meh, a lil stretched. blah...

Ice Pick 09-23-04 03:44 PM

Ya Know

It Flows Right If You Read It Right


So Blah

shake-spear 09-23-04 03:49 PM

nice drop it was long as shit but it was so good i had to read it all keep doin ya thing son 9/10

Artemis 09-23-04 03:49 PM

yea, possibly, but when I read it, it didn't really. But that could be cuz I got too much cafeine in my system, so I might be fucked. Who knos? :)

Ice Pick 09-23-04 03:57 PM

Yah Its Dope

Take The Time And Read It

If You Read It How I Read It

Its A Fuckin Banga

Would Be Too Long For Audio

Im Not Canibus

MadProphet 09-24-04 01:43 AM

shit was pretty nice...long but pretty nice

blazin joints was kinda clever...tossin salad line was nice

i hate all references to preist, r. kelly and rape..that shit was played a week after the story broke

and lol at worser...i dont do that number shit but it was nice...and i dont say a lot of shit on this site is nice

Ysdat 09-24-04 05:25 AM

dope as fuck . It did have some stretched line's . It made it up with rhyme's multi's . nice structure.
8/10

Artemis 09-24-04 01:58 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Ice Pick
Yah Its Dope

Take The Time And Read It

If You Read It How I Read It

Its A Fuckin Banga

Would Be Too Long For Audio

Im Not Canibus

yea, I do audio, so I guess that's why the flow sounded off to me. :)

WORDPLAYA 09-25-04 06:52 PM

shit is fire long as fuck dough
but i feel if it's good don't matter
how long it is hot shit just have 2
ask who da hell are u dissin


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