AITZ vs Mc_BaD_bOy
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting








start uppin the votes ppl

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Check in by: 09-23-04 at 11:58 AM

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AITZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-23-04 11:29 AM.

Mc_BaD_bOy has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-23-04 11:30 AM.

badboy productions man u r unstabel to b usein p diddies label ur hits r pale albums fail its blowina gale bout to hail im going to jail fuk it shinen 26 spinners bout to hit yas leavin more holes then a afganastan ill hooku up wit a plastic surgent hopein u can work it nuttin better then magic but 4 sure evry1 no's u aint have that lyrical magic yo spastic elastic

yo nigga ur face is a discrase to the human race//
rap is not u thig bin a prozy is ur game lyk ur face//
not even u mum wud say she loves u coz ur a wack ass cunt//
not even ur sis wud give u a **grunt** u poor basterd u gotta hunt//
ur rhymes cant hit me ur weak,,,,, weaker than a dumbass fucked up flea//
im so good ill hit u break ur nose with my rhymes i will make u c//

**grunt**=shag

Voted For: AITZ

it's kinda hard to vote on this battle...mc bad boy just came weak...but he had the structure and the flow, no real hard punches though.......AITZ thew some solid ass punches and had some dope multis, it flowed if you read it right, but you got no structure...??? you really gotta work on that shit AITZ put it into better structure and you should be allright...mc bad boy work on your punches you come to weak...

i like punches, i think they win battles so im gonna give this vote to AITZ even though his structure off..i still could understand it

v/aitz..

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Voted For: Mc_BaD_bOy

yo its hard to tell wit such a short battle but badboy gets my voteon dis clearer flow both had nice openers but badboys close was tighter

i voted on yours now vote on mine, i'd appreciate it
thnx peace.

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thanx pz out 1-1 uppin

This was feedback posted for Mc_BaD_bOy
 

both of yer guys verse have bad stucture

This was feedback posted for AITZ
 

i think u guys need to seriously elevate, da structure and flow on both battles were very poor(no hate), dere were no reel punches, i think u guys need to elevate

Voted For: Mc_BaD_bOy

badboy productions man u r unstabel to b usein p diddies label ur hits r pale albums fail its blowina gale bout to hail im going to jail fuk it shinen 26 spinners bout to hit yas leavin more holes then a afganastan ill hooku up wit a plastic surgent hopein u can work it nuttin better then magic but 4 sure evry1 no's u aint have that lyrical magic yo spastic elastic

^^^^^^^^^^^ NO FLOW,,,,,,,,NO PUNCHES,,,,,,,,,NOTHIN ELEVATE USIN STRUTURE HOMIE,,,,,,,,,WITHOUT THAT U HAVE NO FLOW,,,,,,,,, I READ IT BUT NO PUNCHES EITHER ELEVATE



yo nigga ur face is a discrase to the human race//
rap is not u thig bin a prozy is ur game lyk ur face//
not even u mum wud say she loves u coz ur a wack ass cunt//
not even ur sis wud give u a **grunt** u poor basterd u gotta hunt//
ur rhymes cant hit me ur weak,,,,, weaker than a dumbass fucked up flea//
im so good ill hit u break ur nose with my rhymes i will make u c//
^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT MAYNE U HAD ALL AROUND BETTA VERSE THAN AITZ CAUSE U HAD PUNCHES AND FLOW

AITZ-WORK ON YO STRUTURE OK,,,,,,,ITS MESSIN UP DA FLOW,,,,,,,,,,AND YO PUNCHES DIDNT EVEN COME HARDER ELEVATE "OK"

MC-BAD-BOY-U HAD AN ALL AROUND BETTA VERSE,,,,,,,,USE PERSONALS AND PUNCHES NEXT TIME AND USE HARDER PUNCHES

V-MC-BAD-BOY ALL AROUND BETTA VERSE

Voted For: Mc_BaD_bOy

well i didnt really like this battle!! Mc_BaD_bOy i think you win, because you had a little bit of flow, thats all, both sides had weak punches, you both need to elevate, yo aitz, i think you need to start prewritning, it might increase your skill about, wel at least take the tutorial.

vote to Mc_BaD_bOy

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