Empire vs Soulless
 

-[p-S-a]- Tournament Quarterfinals

Battle Rules:

10 - 15 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 09-26-04 at 01:56 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Im Not Wasting A Verse Accept And I Will Accept And Drop Im Tired Of No Shows

Soulless has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-04 03:24 PM.

Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-04 09:39 PM.

I hurt fakes like earthquakes ill leave ya verse at a tilt
Talk hard but ya bigshot bars is just midgets on stilts(1)
What you going through you was 0-2 reset ya record with strobe(2)
Couldnt spit fire with a lighther or hold cypher if you wrote on a globe(2)
You going down this all around K.O like L through N(3)
Like i blast steel at ya glass shield no chance to defend
Leave un with broke hope cuz like i ghost wrote i lyrically own you
Rap shit only whacker spit would be if they spirtually cloned you
Damn fool like Ja-Rule only thing youmurder is INK so stop wowling
You so soft in ya crib beating off to the cover of ya N'SYNCE album
Lyrical exercise i strech guys this verbal areobics for whack rappers
Ya shit basically rated unground is ya elevation like backpackers(4)







EXPLANTIONS-
1)basically his shit is whacked but he look like a BIGshot cuz his record its a false reality like midgets on stilts looking big
2)he reset his record he was 0-2 now hes 12-1 and a cypher is a rap circle just like a globe is a cypher both 360 degrees
3)''ALL AROUND K.O" metaphore the letters around l-n is k and o
4)his shit is so unelevated its underground backpackers are rappers who only listen to underground rap another methaphore

--keyed--- blah blah---
-- I dunno… if ur on this board at all u will get everypersoanl in every line--


Empire… Merk me!!…. Just like you said-that-you-can…
Cuz we know… if you don’t… you’ll just go reset your record-again!!!
Stick to text… cuz ya audios… sure ain’t nothing to boast…*
Cuz I think ya voice couldn’t ‘cut it‘ if I slit ya throat!!!!
Ya skills are crap… you’re the only one screaming-tremendous…
You got played lines… you’re the reason geometric grids were invented!!
Just be real don’t change ya record like you scared of defeat…
Take my edvice… ur best ‘key’… would be to ‘press delete!!!
Your poorly constructed… just like your avatar.. Why u try to be tight..
And your new crew must be stupid… your name ain’t even spelt right!!!!
Stop ya text I’ve had enough of your shit… and so has your peers…
Honeslty… the last time you had A….W was drinking the root beer!!!
Why u start unneeded beef… shit… reading ya text makes me mad…
Cuz ‘Claiming you’re the best’ was prolly the best punch you ever had!!!!!**

Sonned!!!

---- i dont want to try to sway----


but i never reset my record...

Voted For: Soulless

DAYUM!!!! this is hot shit i gotta go bar for bar.

Empire

I hurt fakes like earthquakes ill leave ya verse at a tilt
Talk hard but ya bigshot bars is just midgets on stilts(1)
i like for some reason.....8/10
What you going through you was 0-2 reset ya record with strobe(2)
Couldnt spit fire with a lighther or hold cypher if you wrote on a globe(2)
ehh its aight i guess....7/10
You going down this all around K.O like L through N(3)
Like i blast steel at ya glass shield no chance to defend
ehh just alright AGAIN....7/10
Leave un with broke hope cuz like i ghost wrote i lyrically own you
Rap shit only whacker spit would be if they spirtually cloned you
dopeness child, dopeness...9/10
Damn fool like Ja-Rule only thing youmurder is INK so stop wowling
You so soft in ya crib beating off to the cover of ya N'SYNCE album
punches like this=played....5/10
Lyrical exercise i strech guys this verbal areobics for whack rappers
Ya shit basically rated unground is ya elevation like backpackers(4)
good enuff for a closer.....8/10
coulda been better worded in some places but pretty damn dope, and stop explaing every fuckin line man

Soulless

Empire… Merk me!!…. Just like you said-that-you-can…
Cuz we know… if you don’t… you’ll just go reset your record-again!!!
dope opener, just fuckin sick.....10/10
Stick to text… cuz ya audios… sure ain’t nothing to boast…*
Cuz I think ya voice couldn’t ‘cut it‘ if I slit ya throat!!!!
ehh aight but kinda simple....7/10
Ya skills are crap… you’re the only one screaming-tremendous…
You got played lines… you’re the reason geometric grids were invented!!
complex, good punch just has everything.....9/10
Just be real don’t change ya record like you scared of defeat…
Take my edvice… ur best ‘key’… would be to ‘press delete!!!
played even tho u flipped it......5/10
Your poorly constructed… just like your avatar.. Why u try to be tight..
And your new crew must be stupid… your name ain’t even spelt right!!!!
alroght but not dopeness as usual....7/10
Stop ya text I’ve had enough of your shit… and so has your peers…
Honeslty… the last time you had A….W was drinking the root beer!!!
dope, nothing else to say.....9/10
Why u start unneeded beef… shit… reading ya text makes me mad…
Cuz ‘Claiming you’re the best’ was prolly the best punch you ever had!!!!!**
good enuff for the closer i guess.......7/10

u were kinda on an off but it was dopeness

oh shit. hold tight while i bust out the calculator....

*digging thru backpack*

got it!

empire-44/60=73.33%
souless-54/70=77.14%

damn close shit, empire dont blacklist, soulless just came harder this time around u know i dont hate vote on u.just both of yall came tight but definatly not a ko.
RTF....links in da sig

v//Soulless

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alright drop some honest votes peeps.......

Voted For: Soulless

Souless- An okay verse. Great with the personals and a few good punches. an alright structure. Nice wordplay especially with that A W thing. And the closer was nice. keep it up

Empire- an alright verse. nothing really personal about this and your punches weren't as hard. I know you can come better then this empire. It seemed like you rushed this.
No need to explain punches we get them. Vocab wasn't as nice either. you should rematch.

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Voted For: Empire

break down...

Flow - Emp (easy 2 read relative length in barz)
Vocab - Soul
Punchez - Emp (that wack rapper line got this)
Metaz - Emp (urz actually made sense)

no further xplanation needed pretty 1 sided but i wuz feelin empz verse more then soulz

further xplanation jus incase it might get DQ'd empz verse wuz harder an had more structure it wuz easier 2 read cuz it wuz more spaced out so u could tell which wordz rhymed an which 1'z didn't soulz verse had a couple multiz that didn't rhyme all tha way but empz verse wuz tha 1 i wuz feelin more

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