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Motherfukers, I massacre and teach
Like religious extremist, breach
This code of peace, bring my piece
Hearin more confessions than a priest
Erotic violence, blood cumin on my clothes
Finger fukin this gun, sexual violence carefully composed
Giving a blowjob to the heats barrel, you been disposed
Impregnate my gun gives birth to another bullet cumin your way
Bust you in the leg n arms make you suffer, this our foreplay
Psychological slaughter you like I butchered your brain cells
Fuck competition my metaphors act like cartels
Created this sick satanistic sensational scheme to do well
In hip-hop, intellectual insane insight inside my mind
Amazing accurate addictive advanced flow I designed
Ahead of you at all times, moving forward even wen I rewind
My presence deeply felt when I die I’ll still be a threat to mankind

its aight...
decent wordplay n vocab
maybe couldda done with a chrus n another verse, but not bad for a freestyle
6/10

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p e a c e

O Aight Dats Nice Right Der Mayne Wordplays And Flow'z Put An Chorus Next Time It'll Betta Be Like Dat Mayne So Nice Mayne

6.5/10

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Str8 Trash

fuck u homie like 2 c u do betta!!!

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yo it was prety decent good i felt u dawg i read evry line carfully n got it, hit my open mic up

thanxs man

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Erotic violence, blood cumin on my clothes
Finger fukin this gun, sexual violence carefully composed
Giving a blowjob to the heats barrel, you been disposed
Impregnate my gun gives birth to another bullet cumin your way
Bust you in the leg n arms make you suffer, this our foreplay


hellllll yea dog thas the pimp shit dont listian to these doods, this shit is phat as fuck

ayo, thanxs dawg

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