Phenom - serious joint I did a while back - peep
 

I ain't really looking for feed - cause this is something I wrote for me, and just did to vent some things I was going through. Thought I'd post it so ya'll could peep.

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THE ANSWER

Only You, are the answer
You turned the night into Day
Only You, are the answer
You turned the night into Day

1st Verse

She's 17, been good all her life, shes got nothing to hide/
but now, she'll have to grow up, real quick and decide/
Soak up her pride and tell her parents just what she did/
She ain't the angel she claimed, and when tempted she slid/

Now pregnant with his, and the boy doesnt really care/
she thought it was love, now watch her young and tender heart tear/
left bare, left broken, no longer outspoken/
left alone, no token, and emotionally chokin/

Parents ashamed of her, they don't know who she is/
life turned upside down, from what happened with this/
her teenage freedom is barred, and by her friends shes dropped hard/
pastors kid, can't be seen like this, her life surely scarred/

She looks for someone who can pull this girl through/
She looks for someone who knows just what to do/
She opens the black book, shes not abandoned after all/
Cause no matter her question, You've got her answer just as soon as she calls/

2nd Verse

Life, here one moment, now gone - turned into death/
wrong step, wrong direction, and now, there ain't nothin left/
why this happen? someone tell me whats the reasoning?/
how can I have faith, see this, and still believe in Him?/

Which decision to make, what to give, and what to take/
How much more do I suffer, when do I catch my break/
Is it my fate? To push this heavy burden with its weight?/
Is it too late to control this hate In my current mental state.../

Why'd you take my friend God? not even close to his time/
you got your perfect plan nothing - yo I HATE your design/
bring him back, you know I hate it when his mother cries/
little do I know, this was a blessing in disguise/

Opened their eyes, to questions bout the afterlife/
People wouldnt have noticed, if it weren't for his sacrifice/
What seemed like the Devils attack, was a Godsend in a sack/
although a train killed my friend, many more are on track/

3rd Verse

20 years old, this youthful boy plays the best man/
His best friend takes his wife, give a speech - now all stand/
understand, the end of the week'll, be different from the start/
because of the football sized tumor growing beside his heart/

He feels a pain in his chest and back in succesion/
he notes as the pain grows in an agressive progression/
drives himself to ER, unsure of the severity/
cries in pain as the doc tries to give some clarity/

It's been nearly a month, and still nothing is clear/
each test just brings more confusion, and each test brings more fear/
For his 21st birthday, they decide to operate/
regardless of its success, this boy nears his early fate/

4 days in I.C.U., the pain is beyond incredible/
near to death, the writing on the limestone's looking legible/
My girl tried to consol and ya I understand her/
but when I had the cancer, only YOU had the answer.../

whoa, this shit is tight...man lately it seems cats only drop hotness...this was some emotional stuff, currently i'm putting this song on my playlist and soon on my next c.d....quality wasn't as good as your latest drops but still really good. This was the next level, good to see you took it. I don't know what to say but i'm really impressed...The second verse was perfect and totally on point, the two others were also sick...good job...I have a vision...albertas going finally have a rap star...good shit buddy

man im vibing with this beat SOOOO hard... im hella mad i didnt find it first lol... :P... good shit here..on the real.... this beat is perfect... i'd have gone a differfent route..but you chose an awsome path.... nice way to do it.. -1

whoa, this is a different thing for you to be doin'. But I'm feelin' this, man. You made a very nice emotional track. Yo lyrics are gettin' better, man. I liked this shit. Godo job, man. fo reel, your lyrics gettin' better. Nice shit. I only could read the lyrics cuz I'm at school, but I'll post feedback to the beat when I get home and listen. But lyrically, I liked this song. The hook, could have been better, but stil,, you gettin' betta. props pc

this shit was so fuckin dope... damn lyrically dope as hell, nice beat-- deep shit, dope

wow, nice drop man, damn, so emotional, and ya flow was sick, so different, but thats appreciated because, this site has so much more to offer then just battles and shit, but wow, this track gave me the chills, for a number of reasons, very creative and the content was above par.....nice, it reminded me of spoken word gone song, dope as hell

damn...nice ish...beat was dope as fuck, lyric content off the chain as usual
emotion was great...this track is just ill fo real....

drop some feed on my ish...droppin the village