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keen2B 09-24-04 09:39 AM

keen2B vs scenario
 
Battle Rules:

- 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no bitches


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-27-04 at 09:39 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 09-24-04 09:40 AM

keen2B has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-04 09:40 AM.

System 09-24-04 09:43 AM

Scenario has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-04 09:43 AM.

keen2B 09-24-04 09:55 AM

this guy wants to be a girl
yo he dressess in DRAG
when he fights he slaps people with his handbag..
he drinks cappacino and enjoys the company of fellow fags

if i loose this battle to this queer il break down and cry
id never forgive myself for been beaten by this 'so called GUY'
he's only a joke no-one will ever take him seriously when he crosses their eye
except for elton john* but we all no why.


elton john =famous english gay
ex

Scenario 09-24-04 10:02 AM

i love it how this wack emcee is trying to over come my skills
kid suck dick so much nut be foaming out his mouth like an alkelzter pill

don't tell me to chill, i'm bound to go postal and i don't mean fed ex
i'll have ya bitch giving me dome while i use her as a "head" rest

i'll send u back to ya corner with ya boyfriend and ya strap on dildo
u couldn't even spit like me if u was the saliva dried up on my pillow

if u was married then i would come to ya crib and straight smack ya wife
u beating me, there's a better chance of rick james coming back to life

before u vote on my battles again get some more experience and wins on ya belt *
cause ya 1-7, go to the forum section for newbs and post for elevation help



*lil bitch voted on one of my battles, said my rhymes were off

Scenario 09-24-04 10:09 AM

uppin for this, i'll return the honest vote

Dirty Nigga 09-24-04 10:49 AM

Voted For: Scenario

Scenario got this..

hands down, the more complex verse..
decent punches an personals, okay wordplay, better strucre, easy to follow n read the rhymes..
kinda enjoyable scenarion, keep em comin an keep elevatin homeboy...

KEEN, ya flow was aight, wasnt really feelin ya opener..
an ya finisher was okay, just elevate on vocab n step the creativness side of ya rhymes up..

no hate, just tellin it how i see it ya'll

return the fave in my siig if ya'll got the time

p e a c e

Scenario 09-26-04 11:55 AM

uppin for this, i'll return the honest vote

Scenario 09-26-04 03:41 PM

uppin for this, i'll return the honest vote

CataclyzM-i-C 09-26-04 03:55 PM

Voted For: Scenario

WHOAAAAAAAAA...I SMELL LANDSLIDE VICTORY !!!!!!!!!!...les break it down...

punches - SMASHMOBBB...scenario killt dis nigga point blank no questions asked...aint even gna explain !!!!!

personals - scenario got dis...dint have much but he didnt even have to cuz the other dude was jus so garbage !!!!!...last line was his personal i guess...other nigga aint have nothin at all

meta4s - scenario...1st bar...ridiculous...i was feelin that shyt...fuckin RUTHLESS lololol...funny as shyt 2

wordplay - scenario...simple n plain it dont even matter cuz the other dude was so garbage that anything u spit made u look like a fuckin legend ! lol...good shyt tho

enjoyment - scenario...PUNCHES ALONE SMASHED DIS BATTLE...ITS A WRAP...keen2b dont ever spit again !

Vote - Scenario

~IiL PrOpHeT~ 09-27-04 04:58 PM

Voted For: Scenario

O U KNOW WHO GOT DIS QUICK HANDS DOWN NICE VERSE

PUNCHES AND FLOW

KEEN2B U HAD AN LIL GOOD VERSE BUT WASNT ANY PUNCHES PUT DOWN SOME PUNCHES AND WORK ON DEM FLOWZ
& PERSONALS

QUICK GETS MY VOTE CAUSE HE USED FLOW&PERSONAL&PUNCHES

~PEACE~

big GZ 09-27-04 06:18 PM

Voted For: Scenario

i voted for scenario...he had 5 decent bars...all of them were structured nice, the flow was alright, the metaphors were there too...all around a decent verse.

keen 2b...u should start crying becuz too me and 3 others u did lose this battle to this so called gay guy...your verse was just to simple...there wuz really no thought put into it until the end with the Elton John line...i also think your verse was too short...like i said your verse was too simple to win this one.

please give me an honest vote on my battles

big GZ 09-27-04 06:21 PM

this is one of my open battles...return the favor
 
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=150965

Scenario 09-27-04 06:30 PM

uppin for this, i'll return the honest vote

Parallel 09-27-04 06:35 PM

Voted For: Scenario

senario took this battle lol he had better vocab but his lines a lil streched try put them down your gonna need flow for audio so think of that next time 1 heres what i got for you guys in this battle:
punches: scenario
vocab: S
metas: S
multi's: no one
stucture: S
flow: Keen
opener: S
Closener: K
vote: Scenario
return the favour in any of my battle the links are in my sig peace
~1~


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