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Shit I Seen
I done seen way too many of my homies sufferin
Sayin theres too much shit in this world to put up wit I've seen a couple of homies go too far over the edge And I watched my boyfriend, the love of my life go through pain, and now he's dead Thought the world was too hard for him and he didn't belong To lay down on the tracks and watch a train come towards you, damn you gotta be strong I've watched homies choose their drugs over their kids Get outta jail and don't see em, they go straigh to their dealers cribs I've watched homies stay up for weeks and months at a time Always bitchin unless they got some pills, smoke, or lines I've seen too many people just randomly shot Just walk by crowds of people gathering in the parking lot Because these motherfuckers think other peoples shit is their business ..Can ya'll feel this? |
blaaaazin!
that was aight shorty... some decent rhymes, very creative an it was ALL REAL i liked it, 7/10... only thing is u can tell ya new here, but thats okay, you'll get better as u get more practice, on the whole tho, it was very decent an it had meaning, u stuck with the topic an it was a solid peice propps babygirl |
i was feeling that, it was a decent drop, it was real, i think i felt it because i lost a girlfriend, a kid, and my father all within a year, but anyways i felt this.
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first off you reppin the twin cities ...your six-five-one...im six-one-two...automatically get love there...
secondly...if the story is real...definately good work and good description of what you were sayin...real feelins make real writtens...err...TEXT...1 |
waddup
yea tru story there. real as it could be playa
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