one day
 

one day i'll be somebody
when that day comes every body will know
but now i'm just me
which isn't all that bad
ya-da-da-meen
:huh:

:nono: post if you don't understand the poem

uhhh

it gotta be MUCH longer and deeper

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=150764

^crit that for me puhhleease

I appreciate you took time to write it though
I see in yo sig you wanna be PAC...

got a bit of work ta do mayn

peace

ps.I understand it

hmmmm, i would say this was more of a convo, your having with yourself, try to make your future poems,if any, have more...words, but yes, i can tell you have confidence, but this was not really poem material, in my eyes, not extremely bad, because i have seen worse in this thread, believe it or not, but ok, quick little piece