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**lyrical madnes** try outz

try outs 4 lyrical maddness
drop a dope verse and u in
drop shit n u not
drop a verse 6-10 lines
ill tell u weather u in
1.im am da leader
2.thats it 4 now

yo u need to put me with you crew yo man im hot
im and newbe but im a vet

this is simple cuz i aint trying to give my real shit out yet

J WILL
THE PROBLEM

I'll butter your gutter / close the shutter/
while i murder your mother plus your brother/ so would of i could of / see my reflection in death personified my words are murder weapons/ I cause more pain then a blatter effection/ i'll do to u like osamin binladen did on 911/HIT YOU WITH EVERYTHING like its no Tomorrow fuck up your chest and send you to heaven to meet Ray Charles/ and trust me nigga i aint goin to feel sorrow/ i'll borrow your glock cuz i got a whole lot of Enemies/ but if u lay figure on me u goin to get Assassinated like John F. Kennedy/

holla at me

nice come bck when u get ur 1st win n ill consider it
but ur in up to now just get 1 win n u in

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Originally Posted by J-Will

not realli flowin u gotta make ur linez more even u can't be like "yo i'ma fuck u up wit a punch ta da gut/an then say now what" jus an xample tha linez have 2 be relatively tha same size but itz still kool tho a little on tha basik side but still good :thumbup: