jmsbnd07655 vs teken.
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

good luck

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-27-04 at 05:47 PM

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teken. has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-04 05:47 PM.

jmsbnd07655 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-04 05:48 PM.

"james bonds" a killer with the mic don't let him "spit"
ill use "bond"age and vasiline to have a good time wit ya "chick"
i'm all in your face with ma fist, my punchlines will bring "death"
just like when ill rap a rope round ya neck n' choke you till ya last breath,
"07655" is going to "die" i didn't like your mum so i jizzed in here "eye"
can't wait to see you after you get chopped up and "fried"
in the grill when i get going i spit "flames", and play mind "games"
it's such a shame i can tell he's influenced just by my "name"
teken., it stands for a "fighter" puncline feind so my lines get "tighter"
lets do some "math", in "bodmas" i'm the brackets and your the "divider"


*his name is james bond "bond"age
07665 is a number in his name
bodmas= Brackets power Of Divide Multiply Add Subtrack spells bodmas for those who dint go skool

hope you like it...

im the master lyricist showin skillz and microphone mathematics
im insane but metaphorically speakin, i aint one of those drug addicts!
i'll smash you faggots, im the lyrical dracula, im spectacular
u cant compare with my magic teken!, i'll lyrically laugh at ya!
my lyrical power and ability is insane aswell as my verbal imagery,
im critically, damagin you lyrically, avoidin takin you physically, im literally,
born with lyrical natural instincts,
i'll battle you any time, any place, and any instance!
i aint reserved, why these people wanna battle me!?
i'll perform lyrical shots to make it end up a casualty

lol what dya call that there wasn't any punches n that you had nice wordplay in dat but no punches...

Voted For: teken.

okay..
teken got this, hands down..
more complex verse, better structure, better punches..
nice hard hittin drop an consistent bars, 7/10 teken..

bond, ya flow was aight, ya opener was funny, ya just lacked the killer finisher an the decent punches that teken dropped
no hate, just tellin it how i see it

return face in my sig yall

p e a c e

ye, im kind of new 2 battlin, cuz i normally write bout myself in rhymes!

yo you got potential man... i respect ya for that... thats how i started out writin bout ma self then sumink append in ma life that made me think fuck it... so it went from there...

uppinnn i will return the favour leave a link...

thanx for the feedbak man, i'll work on it. respect

uppin for more votes lets get this rollin...

uppin for more votes come on people stop sleepin... votes will be returned

This was feedback posted for jmsbnd07655
 

no votes both weak one word "elevate" to basic

uppin for votes all votes will be returned just leave a link... thnx.

Voted For: jmsbnd07655

neither had great structure or great flow, but bnd won dis one, because it came down too, hoo had da harder punches. both had great punches but i think bnd's punches hit harder and they were more consistent. my vote is bnd