Death Tearz vs Tha Phoenix
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Check in due in one week
Verse due in two weeks.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-28-04 at 04:51 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

death tearz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-27-04 06:03 PM.

this will be my first and last verse. i am not on anymore so enjoy it.

man evertime someone kills ya u cry yourself alive when dying
when they hear u crying they re asure u and say "Keep trying"
Names phoenix cuz he wants to bring heat, try throwin a sweater
u wish u could hit hard, but your punches r hard like Blu jays feathers
u went against a flamer got fucked then got burn
i bet you dont remember him, too many his name wuz dragon
u say the verse is due in 2 weeks, but really its 3 days
this dudes so retarded hed get lost in a 10 foot maze
now in your battles u up more than MJ shots
course not much to look at youve only done 3 battles
Naughty, Dragon, and that wanna be newb Jay-Z,
only beat naught, so prepare to lose to me, death tearz
yo* is the best word u got in your brain of vocabulary
wow dont use it all at once it could be a little scary
its a miracle when u go lyrical people dont go thats hysterical
phoenix i didnt even kno u were in dopeness defined
thought to be in you actually had to rhyme.
u need to get better lines, so u thought youd just take mine,
and i dont blame ya its probably the best u ever will find.
now all i ask it that u dont freeze up like eminem on 8 mile
and so u kno a freestyle is sometin u dont write and put on file
usually i go fast but u r not as Intellectually gifted so this may take a while
now this is rapping not the US politics
i tell how it is, but like bush and kerry u r full of it.
ive gone through a crew battle once, and we merked em till their wuz none left
im sick of beatin newbs, sry fuck you is wut i meant!
phoenix u cant even spell THE the right way
names comes from a Harry potter book, aint that kid gay?
u need a new name, but since u dont want to die how bout cockroach,
to the girls u r either the best friend or there is always hope
now ive given u punches that talk bout everythin u can do
once this rhyme is done youll be evicted from your crew
i make death cry in pain becuz the punches burn harder than usher
just like ICP i only have one thing to say, "FUCKA"

*his emcee intro just said yo

well yall thats all u get from me. ill be checkin the site to see the battle. so peace out.

if u do not get the personals then do some research. if u still dont get it than dont vote, ill explain em all if i have 2.