J-Will vs Yvonne
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

gd luck yo..:)

Minimum posts to vote: 60

Check in by: 09-28-04 at 02:05 PM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

JWill Dq'ed for going over line limit

J-Will has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-25-04 02:39 PM.

yo its more then ten lines

I have intelligent mind, the intellect of Einstein
A poet using my art for design
Destroyin adversaries when I pick up a pen
And my demo's more deadly when you play it again
Lyrics deal with endurance, the most mega performance
And if you wanna battle, you better have insurance
A walkin sunspot, my energy is radium
A gladiator generating your stadium
Cause I'm compelling, acute and never yelling
Syllables slide from my throat and excelling
A poet possessed like the Excorcist
Accomodating the transcript vocalist
Exposed and expressed, no holds barred
Dance to my record till you fall in a graveyard
You calculate me wrong, I might afford ya
Physical harrassment, spiritual torture
Like the flick of a Bic science I kick
And you couldn't come close to the pain I inflict
I could still stimulate, even if my tongue's blisted
Lyrics are sick cause my mind is kinda sick
Rhymes are related to the havoc and harm
My words are packed just like a nuclear bomb
Vocals flow like H2O out of a faucet
Don't even grab the mic cause you lost it
I bust your braincells, pierce your eardrum
and i put one in your girls face nah i aint talking about gunz im talking about my cum........... hahahaha....................

Yvonne has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-25-04 04:18 PM.

you pussy nigga may be repping the nok out kings
but i cone ya teeth out with my shining pinky rings
my lines r like a rocket,ready 2 blow on ya face in a min
u'ld best drop the mic&leave,cos u borin like mc-bean*
ur punches built on a soft sandy foundation,you'll never kill
u have no hope when i put u in tention,its time u rite ya will**
i lyrically destroy this phony bodysytem,put a stop 2 his heart
but even if i used a simple language his brain would still fart

*ally MCbean...y'all know the show...right?..its boring

**his name says "will"


vote and i will return the fav


holla

lmfao...u shuda obeyed the rules mayne....it said 6-8 line........lol











uppin this bitch peeps

Voted For: Yvonne

Yvonne she had the brains to go the line limit :).
Pz.

i have to much to say to write only 6-8 lines
lol im to overdevelope to only write 6- 8 lines
and yo i aint a she archeologist

Voted For: Yvonne

yvonne raped this fool.....
opener - J-will
closer - yvonne
flow - yvonne
punchez - yvonne
vocab - yvonne
v. yvonne, man this was a merkin and yvonne isnt the show called ally mcbeal???
meh any ways j u went way ova the line regulation to keep ya lines within regualtions aiight battle...... return the favour plz.

lol u right its ally mcbeal.........i always make that fucking mistake.....lol


upping peepz