Jesus Listen To Me
[....Chorus....]
Jesus Listen Ta Me.....I'm Tired Of LIVIN THIS LIFE I Juss Wanna Grow Wingz, Fly Away From Where I Can't Get HIT WIT THA PIPEZ I Even Think About Bein Safe In My CRIB IN THE NIGHT Why Must I Live Life Comin To Tha STRIP JUSS TO FIGHT Shitz Crazy...I Could Get KILLED WIT THE GAT So I Stay Wit A Vest...Cause I Aint Catchin STEEL TO MY BACK But Why Must I PEEL WIT THE MACK? Cause If I Get Killed...Tha Game Juss Lost Tha REALEST WIT RAP [....Verse One....] Listen Jesus, I'm Gettin Tired Of HUGGIN THE BLOCK I Feel I'm Growin Out Tha Hustle Game,An THUGGIN WIT ROCKZ I'm Tryna Get My Life Straight Wit Diamondz Dat BLUSH IN THE DROP Get My Nukkaz Out The Hood So They Dont Get Sprayed When They BUSTIN THE GLOCKZ But When Somethin Goes Wrong...Instigatorz Be Tha First Ta RUSH IN THE SPOT But When They In Tha Same Predicament,They Try An Act Like Itz NOTHIN TA WATCH When Ya Broke...Even Ya Own Nukkaz Behind Hopin You Stay STUCK IN THESE BLOCKZ But When You Shine....Then They Wanna Come Back Cause You STUNNIN WIT DROPZ Even When You Facin Tha Oddz...It Seemz Some Of Ya Catz Is RUNNIN WIT COPZ They Dont Wanna See Ya Makin It Out Tha Slumz...They Wanna See Ya RUNNIN WIT SHOTZ They Won't Even Care If They Theif Ya Chedda.....Cause They Tryna Cop SOMETHIN THAT POPZ So Why Around My Real Nukkaz I Gotta Keep My Cash In SOMETHIN WIT LOCKZ Jesus...Whys This Gotta Do Down???Was It In Ya Planz SOMETHIN THAT DROPZ??? I Don't Think So, So They More Determined To Make My Life SOMETHIN THAT STOPZ [....Chorus....] Jesus Listen Ta Me.....I'm Tired Of LIVIN THIS LIFE I Juss Wanna Grow Wingz, Fly Away From Where I Can't Get HIT WIT THA PIPEZ I Even Think About Bein Safe In My CRIB IN THE NIGHT Why Must I Live Life Comin To Tha STRIP JUSS TO FIGHT Shitz Crazy...I Could Get KILLED WIT THE GAT So I Stay Wit A Vest...Cause I Aint Catchin STEEL TO MY BACK But Why Must I PEEL WIT THE MACK? Cause If I Get Killed...Tha Game Juss Lost Tha REALEST WIT RAP [....Verse Two....] As I Get Older I Get Wiser...As I Get WISE I GET SMARTER But I'm Smart Enough Ta Realize They Want My LIFE TA GET SLAUGHTERED My Best Bytch Right Now Is Tha 45...But I Ain't TRYIN TA SPARK HER I Don't Even Wanna Nut In My Shorty Cause I Don't Even Wanna Think About DERIVIN A DAUGHTER I Ain't Tha Type Ta Go Back To Her Ex, Brag About Some DIAMONDZ I BOUGHT HER Dat'z Not Me, I Rather Get A Shot To Tha Chest...And Have My Body LIE IN THE WATER I Rather Cop A Stable Job, Instead Of Investin' Coke...Gettin BREAD FOR MY DIMEZ It's Not That It'll Please My Family...It'z That I Know It'z BEST FOR MY WIFE Even Further Than That....So Now I Stick Wit INVESTIN MY RHYMEZ Prayin' One Day My NECKLACES SHINE But I Got These Desperate Prickz Plottin On Tha Boy Tryna Take Away Tha REP WIT THE NINEZ This Is Why I Get FED UP WIT LIFE I'm Tired Of These Nukkaz Tryna Get Me WET UP WIT PIPEZ So Now I Juss Hold My Head, Till I Finally EXIT THIS LIFE.... [....Chorus....] Jesus Listen Ta Me.....I'm Tired Of LIVIN THIS LIFE I Juss Wanna Grow Wingz, Fly Away From Where I Can't Get HIT WIT THA PIPEZ I Even Think About Bein Safe In My CRIB IN THE NIGHT Why Must I Live Life Comin To Tha STRIP JUSS TO FIGHT Shitz Crazy...I Could Get KILLED WIT THE GAT So I Stay Wit A Vest...Cause I Aint Catchin STEEL TO MY BACK But Why Must I PEEL WIT THE MACK? Cause If I Get Killed...Tha Game Juss Lost Tha REALEST WIT RAP |
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=151406
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=151532&page=2 my links i replied to more but just left 2 |
uppin for soem fuckin feedback
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Aight Ill be staright with you, It had a nice concept But 0 structure in my book, Very nice wordplay and all that but Man U need 2 elevate.... And whats with all the "caps locks"? Well Man Uppin this piece I give u a
6.7/10 Feed my piece if u can |
capz= emotion in the piece since it waz text kid
but fuck that shit stretch out the barz but kanye waz right if you talk about Jesus your recrod wont get played |
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