§treet§yndicate vs ill bing aka U.G
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-26-04 at 06:20 PM

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ill bing aka U.G has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-25-04 05:25 PM.

I’m break this Brooklyn street agent in to phase's/ that don’t even face me put this street agent in to a maze /
Well sprain my flows burning him like-mace-does//
Roll this suppose to be emcee up and smoke-him-like-a-blunt//
Stick my dick in your lens and fracsher your optic nerves//
My spits only incurring mental murders and atracting iris' incurring in murders//
I’m gona rip the biceps from your arm//
Let the blood drip and hold a blood funding farm//
This dude snitches more then a f.b.I wire on his chest//
If a pimp was looking for a bitch he would be hired with out a guess//
I murked you so ugly that f.b.I dint bother to investigate--it//
Since I left your body illdisposed and incinerated//

persnals
(streetsyndicate means- agent or manger)
(hes from brooklyen)

uppin for votes

§treet§yndicate has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-25-04 07:21 PM.

ight here it is.......
Yo me and my niggas be chilling down in breezy*//And this nigga 0-9 so this shit should be easy//and i'm the king of the streets and thats why they call me syndicate// this nigga hating cause he cant get the girls that i be chillin wit// You bitches know i roll on 24's// They be calling me pimp cause i get payed by all the whore's// Nigga you couldn't cum phat even if you were ejaculating to free willy// Me and my boys leaving u ho's looking silly*// but thats enough// cause even though u try being big your really not tough// i out weigh you like a opera singer and a miget on a see saw// Yourlike a marshmello this nigga stays hardcore// To kill you i dont need no nines// Cause i spit explicit my words are my knives// i'm lik a cat I'v been shot so many times its like i have 9 lives// When ever i rol by the block niggas be calling there wives// but there is no answe why cause there under me// We walk round the street and i'm on wanted signs for 20 g's// I still walk around the streets like im free// But this is over i go this shit one// I'm leaving him in the hospital and his mom crying i miss my son//

breezy- a place down in New York
silly- inside jokes with friends for someone really dumb

uppin...... needsome votes i return the favor. also come join N.E.W.§ Finest.... were a new crew we still need a few more people to be final

Voted For: §treet§yndicate

aight this is how this one breaks down... no hate first off but im gonna say WACK BATTLE...

aight here it is

Structure- ILL
Flow-Street
Multis-neither
Metas-neither
punches-street
personals-both

punches won this one for you man.... imma tell u right now dawg u almost lost this with that wack structure... u gotta work on that shit big time dawg cause that shit will lose you battles. but this one was close other than that so imma give this one to street... no hate tho to ILL u did your thing and much respect for that, just come harder with punches and personals cause THAT is what wins battles right there 9 times out of 10.....

VOTE- STREET

Voted For: §treet§yndicate

not av ery good battle....

Street:
ok...
The lines Were S---T--R--EC--H--E---D
like whoa!!! but you had some ok lines
in there in terms of wordplay...but flow wasn't that good
at all...structure your wrods better also
it was hard for me to read.....

U.G.: yo man you need to elevate bad
I dunno if some of ur verse got cut off
but the structure and flow wAS BAD
the punches were plaid to DEATH
try to use persoals too
He even had a personal for himself

vote/SS

peace

Voted For: §treet§yndicate

aight i have to give this to street. Well his structure was better (which is hard to tell from the way he writes it) and his punches were stronger, ill bling i just wasnt feeling u, man u had sumthing nice but it should have been harder. U streched the lines for some bars and that killed the flow.

Voted For: §treet§yndicate

aight yo this was a weak battle i mean i know ya'll are newbies but ive seen a lot better from them this battle wasnt that good but hey your just starting out so ill hand it to ya for trying...
§treet§yndicate- aight man you got this but just barely you had no structue not that well worplay and you had ur stuff talked out it was too long so work on that and some wordplay..also you coulda hit a lil harder with your punches and next time throw in some personals cuz it would help over all 4/10

ill bing aka U.G- aight you had an okay structure had weak punches but better personals and wordplay but work on your structure and i saw some metas nice but it was a close battle

you both need to elevate more

metas-ill 2/10
punches-§treet 6/10
structure-none
personals-ill 3/10
wordplay-ill 5/10
flow-§treet 5/10
opener-§treet 4/10
closer-ill 3/10

you both need to elevate and dont self glorify thats just gona get you less votes

return the favor

Voted For: §treet§yndicate

iight check i peeped this out..even though i dont peep text battles much..but w.e check it...syndicate gets my vote cuz his overall flow seemed better and his openin line crushed this kids petty verse..but syndicate you gots alot to work on after that free willy line ya verse went down hill from there..and never came back up hill..na'mean dont talk about ya self that much..get to the point its a battle..na'mean..and for that other dude..heres a good tip you need more then syndicate even though yall both need it.."USE MULTIS" dont just think of funny lines and then paste them after each other it wont flow right iight holla 1ne..

My Vote Syndicate..