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Chitown_brotha 09-25-04 08:58 PM

Check This Out And Rate It........
 
it's bin a long time i posted sumttin on this fucking forum so please sumone get of yo lazy azz and check this and rate and give feedback,,,

emjoy,,

every morning i wake up i turn on the news,,//
all i c is wars & conflicts that where made by propaganda and power abuse,,//
the make us choose witch side we take participation two,,//
butt no mather wat we do we still lose,,//
couse gouverment is proped with to many corrupted dickheads and fools,,//
with all those lies,,its hard to swallow the truth,,//
everyone is beying watched they even tap payphone booths,,//
they trying seduce people by making promises that never come thru,,//
they doing there best to fix the world when home needs to be fixed two,,//
butt what do they do,,use tax payers money to contribute terrorist groups,,//
instead of focus on public housing health & wealth education and schools,,//
butt there is nuttin we can do,couse gouvernment allways bin screwed,,//
new world order are the hand's that let these puppet pawns move,,//
and we are the expendabel figures that are easy to remove,,//
its hard to imagine what kind shit hapend in few last century's that whent thru,,//
they hide and hold back the information so its hard prove,,//
we ask question & answers butt they only leave us with minor clue's,,//



Kawn Flixx 09-25-04 09:31 PM

hmm...

the topic wasn't all that good...
gov't topics go knowwhere cuz we hear of it all the time

The flow was a bit on and off at some points
though I liked some points of it like this one:
everyone is beying watched they even tap payphone booths,,//
they trying seduce people by making promises that never come thru,,//
^ though it was poorly structured

but I don't care about that anymore

jus elevate a lil bit more
cuz you did good
for someone with that many post

peace

peep my any of my open mics on my sig


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