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Kawn Flixx 09-25-04 09:02 PM

turn my music high-vol.1 of Pro freestyles
 
Turn my music--- High,HIgh,HIGh,HIGH yer--

another post of printings... I wrote for you to indulge
veiw the lyrics...you feel it I know... becuse its dope
I Sound bound of my self...kinda Cocky but you like me though
see my heart outside...external vision... get the thermal sensors
cuz when they turned on.... comin is them homing missles
hot spit collision...don't agree check my collab with quit witted!!! :laugh:
and print it!!...and change and take credit and extend it...
compared to me...the remix'll be hurroundous unless i'm in it

Turn my music--- High,HIgh,HIGh,HIGH yer--

Re-Read the Verse twice...to see the still rising price...
of shock value I Pile too you....you will pay for this site
crush your "choppy" rhymes till they "diced"...i'm quite tight
if you don't agree you have no insight...holding down my mic
though I keep it high....even while in flight....no bites for you...
if you acn't handle me...only BITE wat you can chew!!!...
this site got me moving dudes...how much can pro prove to you...
skip the hype and just take my advice..jus turn my music high..

Turn my music--- High,HIgh,HIGh,HIGH yer--
Blow through you dudes like my city windy skies..
My head focused right now like the hair that diddy has (mohawk)
any class I pass is only past tense..to convice you... I brag

(BEAT GOES OFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
about my past prints...no lies...any lies...deserve cindyflies (poison toung)
put down your kicks and walk through my footprints that Lie
Fuuk this shit, I spit even if yaw niggas don't critise!!!!!

PEACE

Kawn Flixx 09-25-04 09:15 PM

uppin for some crits

please :help:

Acuity 09-25-04 09:21 PM

^ hey yo man it was tight....jus some bits of 1st verse were off beat and didnt make any sense bt verse 2 was tight. Peace check my battles

Kawn Flixx 09-25-04 09:38 PM

see my heart outside...external vision... get the thermal sensors
cuz when they turned on.... comin is them homing missles

^ homing missles have HEAT sensors

get it now?

thanks for the crit

peace

Scenario 09-25-04 09:43 PM

hot shit proverse, i expected nothing less from ya, looking forward to a remix and more collabs with ya

Kawn Flixx 09-26-04 02:12 AM

upping for critisism on my collection
of words combined into a rhyming scripture
of an hip hop nature...in a time period
of 0.0 seconds if that is possible to create

please

Kawn Flixx 09-26-04 05:28 PM

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

uppin please

SenesIzIt 09-26-04 06:00 PM

that was pretty good...i couldnt really follow along very well though....5/10...1

Kawn Flixx 09-26-04 06:10 PM

5/10 aint good

that's terrible :(


thanks for critin tho

pc


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