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~Luciano~ 09-25-04 09:16 PM

Trooper vs .::critical::.
 
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Ai vs D.2.R

10 Lines


No Crew Votes


No Recycling


No Biting


3 = K.o




*Coming Soon*

Minimum posts to vote: [b]400


Check in by: 09-27-04 at 09:16 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.


Trooper wins by 3-0 KO

System 09-26-04 11:52 AM

.::critical::. has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-04 11:52 AM.

Kayem 09-26-04 12:03 PM

...Im Spittin ingeneous material, step back when i spray the vapour...
...Claimin ya possesin intelligence when you can't even hit the space bar ...

...You were disigned for death and this arena will be your "final destination" ...
...Thought ur Feminine wristband was concealed, u gay? we deserve an explanation...

...Ur Merley Basic, Your Out Of Ur "Depth" Like Pockets Full Of Sand...
...Any "Trooper" will be quick to "fall-back" jump at my every "command" ...

...Gangta, Nah if you wrote an auto-Biography It Would Be A Sure "Short-Story"
...Repping Authentic? Ur Beyond Artificial Like The Knife u Carry In ya Iventory ...

... You Claim You Got Game The Only Peices You Carry Is Jig-Saw Puzzles ...
...pathetic Lines are useless Only time u "Look" Deep is When u Stare at Puddles...

Most Of the punches were about his sig, profile,name, user title :established intelligence and his rapperz inventory.
Second Bar Was About The Movie Final Destination. 4th bar: he is in Ai: Authentic Intelligence. The Links Explain The Rest.
If you do not understand the punches, wordplay, metas, Dont Vote!

System 09-26-04 10:22 PM

Trooper has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-04 10:22 PM.

~Luciano~ 09-26-04 11:10 PM



From the Check U've Been Suspensfull Im not one to Ridical
Intelligence vs Dicks 2 Ride Preferences This isnt Very Critical

"Your Stat's On Wax Equal" that of an "In-Accurate Rambler"
Desasterious Lasic Victim Basically your an In-Accurate Gambler

Geographically Your the Size of Haiti~D2r Isnt a Master~Nation
D2r Vs Ai theres No Point like Finger Amputee's in Master-Bation

I Witnessed your Perification~5th Defeat to "C" Lost this Mission
Resemblence of Ray charles Without glasses You Miss the Vision

His Assisisnation Attempts are Pathetic No Skills for me 2 Debit
Your Affiliated with Rejection Like Mc Hammer Applying 4 Credit


O shit almost didnt make the time i typed this shit up in 10 minz and Left the crib

Blah Bitch

~Luciano~ 09-27-04 01:56 AM

Vapour and space bar
neva will rhyme lol

and Story
and inventory
will never fit





Nuff Said

Yvonne 09-27-04 02:11 AM

Voted For: Trooper

trooper gets this cos...

he had a better vocab..his wordplay was very tight..hia punches hit harder too..his structure was way better and his verse kept on flowing so well...

I Witnessed your Perification~5th Defeat to "C" Lost this Mission
Resemblence of Ray charles Without glasses You Miss the Vision

^^^ dat bar was tight!!


criticals verse was gd but i wasnt really feeling the flow...yeah links were therre but personals werent as tight as troopers..no hate tho...

holla at mines plz...........thanx

Status 09-27-04 02:12 AM

Voted For: Trooper

aight this was a weak crew battle i thought you where to try your best in crew battles but i guess times have changed......

TROOP: as much as i hate to vote for oyu i have to ....aight you came real weak but i guess it was enough to win this battle....god shit i like how you kept on trashen the other crew nice shit for a crew battle but not as good as i seen from you before......

crit: aight you was coo.....nice personals but strectched lines for ever....damn and you did personals..that would be good for a regular battle but since this was a crew battle you should have took more time out to speak about AI but you tried and thats all that counts....

vote=troop

~Luciano~ 09-28-04 02:19 AM

uppin this shit
damn this 15 shit stinx

King Solo 09-28-04 05:54 AM

This was feedback posted for .::critical::.
 
nice drop from both...............
i think critical took this battle..........

technically i aint in D2R anymore so i cud vote, but i'm not going to cuz it mite cause some controversy and beef.........

50Cal. 09-28-04 09:31 PM

Voted For: Trooper

From the Check U've Been Suspensfull Im not one to Ridical
Intelligence vs Dicks 2 Ride Preferences This isnt Very Critical
good fucking personal lol dope a 10/10
"Your Stat's On Wax Equal" that of an "In-Accurate Rambler"
Desasterious Lasic Victim Basically your an In-Accurate Gambler
streched dope vocab nice diss a 7/10
Geographically Your the Size of Haiti~D2r Isnt a Master~Nation
D2r Vs Ai theres No Point like Finger Amputee's in Master-Bation
no nice try aint really hit 5/10
I Witnessed your Perification~5th Defeat to "C" Lost this Mission
Resemblence of Ray charles Without glasses You Miss the Vision
dope fucking flow good ass metaphore and wordplay here a 8/10
His Assisisnation Attempts are Pathetic No Skills for me 2 Debit
Your Affiliated with Rejection Like Mc Hammer Applying 4 Credit
ok ender couldve been better a 6/10[B]
total 36-50

Im Spittin ingeneous material, step back when i spray the vapour...
...Claimin ya possesin intelligence when you can't even hit the space bar ...
[B]i got the rhyme need a accent for it ok punch not hot at all a 4/10

...You were disigned for death and this arena will be your "final destination" ...
...Thought ur Feminine wristband was concealed, u gay? we deserve an explanation...
LOL oh shit lol that was a dope personal hahaha funny as fuck a 10/10[B]
...Ur Merley Basic, Your Out Of Ur "Depth" Like Pockets Full Of Sand...
...Any "Trooper" will be quick to "fall-back" jump at my every "command" ...
[B]ok kinda played wasnt really a good diss 5/10

...Gangta, Nah if you wrote an auto-Biography It Would Be A Sure "Short-Story"
...Repping Authentic? Ur Beyond Artificial Like The Knife u Carry In ya Iventory ...
lol oh shit hahahaha dope again that was a hard line on his crew a 9/10
... You Claim You Got Game The Only Peices You Carry Is Jig-Saw Puzzles ...
...pathetic Lines are useless Only time u "Look" Deep is When u Stare at Puddles
[B]ender was weak also a 5/10

TOTAL-33-10

BASICALLY TROOPER BARELY GOT THIS GOOD DROPS FROM YOU BOTH REAL NICE VOCAB GOOD SHIT HERE

~Luciano~ 09-28-04 10:06 PM

Thats a wrap good shit critical


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