Blaze vs AutoMATIK™
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-26-04 at 12:15 AM

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AutoMATIK™ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-25-04 11:46 PM.

Blaze has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-25-04 11:52 PM.

aight lets go man

Ima be switchin from manual from AutoMATIC
ma lyrics are going to hit u wit some static
im the pimp of rap and u gonna get slapped
if rap was real life nigga u would get capped
cuz u just like PG while im being R Rated
and when my lyrics hit u be decapitated
man i know ur kind u just FLASHY*, but realy nuttin but chockers
and if u know my kind they call us autoMATICAL smokers
i know it might not be definite winnings
but nigga, im prepared to go to 9th inning
im strong i dont care if i loose ill come back
if this is NFL, nigga prepare for a sack

nice dropp man, im set i know i didnt come hard enough, but i give u props, plus u way longer then im here.

Voted For: AutoMATIK™

HA GOOD

It's a Known Fact Clowns Like This Will 'Never Be Nice'
I Spit In All Angles Quick ... So I Should Of Been Named A 'Veteran Twice'
^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE OPENER GOOD PUNCH & FLOW

Im 'Shreadin Ya Life' I'll Beat You Text And Audio You Have 'No Case'
Only Cucomber will Vote For You,Becase They Have 'No Taste'
'Face It' ... Your Rhyme's Blown Out . Battlin You I .. 'Hate This'
^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT AIGHT GOOD PUNCH


You Soft ... So Take Yo Punches To An 'Aerobic Weight Bench'
This Dude Is Handin Out Wins Like Losin Is His 'New Fetish'
Yo Open Mic Has No Replies Cuz Ppl Dont Wanna Here Shit That 'you edit'
This Battles Over,Either You In Or You 'Out Son' ...
I Spit illness So I'll Probably Be Too Sick To Remember the 'Out Come'
^^^^^^^^^^^^ LOL NICE CLOSA MAYNE


Ima be switchin from manual from AutoMATIC
ma lyrics are going to hit u wit some static
^^^^^^^^^ WEAK

im the pimp of rap and u gonna get slapped
if rap was real life nigga u would get capped
^^^^^^^^^ WEAK


cuz u just like PG while im being R Rated
and when my lyrics hit u be decapitated
^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD VOCAB BUT WEAK

man i know ur kind u just FLASHY*, but realy nuttin but chockers
and if u know my kind they call us autoMATICAL smokers
^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD PERSONAL AND A PUNCH

know it might not be definite winnings
but nigga, im prepared to go to 9th inning
im strong i dont care if i loose ill come back
if this is NFL, nigga prepare for a sack
^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD CLOSA U DIDNT HIT HARD ON DEM PUNCHES EXCEPT DA FLASHY LINE GOOD PERSONAL AND A PUNCH

BUT I THINK AUTOMATIK GOT DIS BECUZ OF HARDER PUNCHES AND FLOW HE CAME HARD WIT DEM PUNCHES

V-AUTOMATIK CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND FLOW

~PEACE~

Voted For: AutoMATIK™

automatic took this fairly easy, he had beta wordplay and metas in his punches.
blaze ya lines were too short to make a gud punch,try keep ya struc constant,overall blaze was jus making statements whilst auto woz hittin wit punches.

return tha fav both of ya plz.....
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Voted For: AutoMATIK™

Auto Got this One....

Blaze: Structure Was Okay Couple of Lines Were A Lil Stretched, You Need To Word Ya Shit Betta Too. Punches Were Pretty Basic.

AutoMATIK: Structure And Flow Was Dope. Ya Punches Were Alot More Complex/Wittier Than Blaze's. Ya Whole Verse Was Betta. Wordplay Metas and I Think you Had Some Personals: I Think Tha Open-Mic Thing Was A Personal. Overall A Good Verse.

Vote: AutoMATIK

This was feedback posted for Blaze
 

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