Elusiv G vs CriTiC
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

this is a topical battle, topic is: RAGE INSIDE OF YOU ( the mc)

to vote use following criteria: lyrics, metas, multies, wordplay, originality, topic ocverage (wethre his rhyme relates to topic) and readability. U can add or remove sum of theses but make votes gd. Critic make sure u dnt no sjow.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-26-04 at 02:07 PM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.

Elusiv G has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-04 01:37 PM.

CriTiC has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-04 01:38 PM.

Simplistic words adjacent to others with profound meaning
Feeling to express in tongue,.. Impossible minds still racing
Muted by my captures, circulation cut, legs tightly fastened
Blinded by them, by gunpoint I was taken felling frightened
The atmosphere is damp, like I’m trapped in a tiny dry sauna
Airs really musky, smells of urine, this is slow mental torture
Voices getting stronger, dialect in verses I can’t comprehend
I don’t want to be interrogate or torture unconscious I pretend
Footsteps enter my hell, I hear the safety click out of position
I need to reaction now,,. or will this be my last final decision
I need to unleash my rage to brake out of the hell I’m hidden
The primal instinct explode as I brake out, my actions forbidden