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Da Point vs -EXPLICIT-
Battle Rules:
10 Lines Max No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting ^^ Better rules man.. Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 09-26-04 at 03:04 PM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. |
Better rules in this.. good luck
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Da Point has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-04 02:46 PM.
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-EXPLICIT- has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-04 02:47 PM.
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Can’t make his own style so he tries to bite from One-Man-Band*
Can’t hook up with a chick, so he gets his sister to give him hand** Yo rhymes are wack and bland.. Even dead people run from you*** Class-Sic merkin.. Kids so wack he got kicked from his last crew**** Nobody likes you.. No one Would give a fuck if you slit ya wrist I insist ya do it jus cease to exist fuck it ill do it I just cant resist Fuck this bitch like dead batteries ya rhymes don’t pack a punch Kid acts tough as fuck..yet ya kno he rolls with the brady bunch ***** Fuck it.. imma put two holes in this herbs back like the number 8 Realize. picking up “fat chicks” is the only time you “carry weight” * Tried to bite OMB’s font style.. ** Has a sister.. pics were posted of the hoe somewhere *** Avvy **** Kicked outta Class-Sic ***** Acts tough all the time.. then jus gets merked.. Wrote this in the other battle thread.. but then i noticed the rules.. |
Explict is everyones enemie his life an't even worth two pennies he's embaressed by his name cause he was named at brith jenny Stupid prick thinks he can rhyme sick but shit he's a flip can't flip the script he justs trips and falls down 2 his last hip what an asshole tellin me to slit wists go back to ya trashhole just blow away and lands somewhere far like da north pole Everytime you rhyme it's like your liein and mime wid no mind you see explict everyone knows your a loser face it u act nine! his birth was a curse and fuckin made his mummas womb burst he thinks he's so kool but my rhymes will beat ya n slap ya first |
Alright lets get some votes in hurrrr...
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Voted For: -EXPLICIT-
-EXPLICIT-....this was a solid drop, opened up with a dope opener with personals right off the start and a good punch. the whole verse kicked the shit outta Da point. Good flow, perfect structure, wicked punches, and personals everywhere...you knocked this guy out then whipped the floor with him...one sided battle definately.....fav line.... "Nobody likes you.. No one Would give a fuck if you slit ya wrist I insist ya do it jus cease to exist fuck it ill do it I just cant resist " ...nice hard punch with some solid multis...overal verse 8.5/10 good drop Da Point ... your drop wasn't bad but it was just weak....your birth name is jenny??? WEAK, plus spelling errors everywhere, it didn't even look like you cared about this battle, maybe thats why you lost so bad...? your structure and flow as good, but you didn't really have that intense of a vocab or anything and your punches just didn't hit to hard...you coulda came stronger, you act like your nine? fall on your hip...come on man...elevate..no hate....5/10.. v/ -EXPLICIT- please drop an honest vote on this battle with good feedback...it keeps gettin re-opened.... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=150254 thank you |
Voted For: -EXPLICIT-
-Explicit-: U had more personals, punches were sorta hitting, not really any multi's, i like the meta's, structure was damn near flawless, good flow, ok opener, hot closer, i think the personals won it for u Da Point: no hate but this sucked, good structure, good flow, but some of the rhymes sucked and it looked like u fed off his some how because of the slit ya wrists line, punches were hardly hitting, meta's were ok, expand ya vocab, elevate kid and use some personals vote: Explicit no hate, return the honest vote, battles are in my sig |
Aight uppin this shit.....
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Uppin this lets get it closed hurr
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Uppin here.... lets get it closed...
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This was feedback posted for -EXPLICIT-
lol nice personals mann and Sinner dont feed off his rhymes just to help u out
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Uppin For Some Votes>.............................
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Uppin for damn votes here... come on....
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