-Abstrakt- vs WORDPLAYA
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-26-04 at 06:18 PM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.

-Abstrakt- has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-04 05:18 PM.

WORDPLAYA has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-04 05:26 PM.

fuck a Hotel it won't help u Get No Betta like Cassidy*
so bitch if i was him n he me; he wouldn't blast 4 me
a tragedy bout 2 happen ;stick 2 rappin X-Mas gifts
im 2 heavy n diss game 4 Beef u gonna need a Fork Lift
u Abstrakt snapped kuz u was givin a break like KIT KATS**
4get dat i'll stab u in ya funky tongue so call me Tic Tac***
i split dat... 2 pieces of ~ART~ .....2gother now u APART****
play on words from da start ya ~ABS~ can't block ya heart

[CLOSER]
it's BEEN SO LONG like MYSTIKAL but now LET'S GET READY
u really take after ya name now kuz u been shred 2 Confetti

*Cassidy is in his sig
**KIT KATs sayin is give me a break
***a thumb Tac is sharp a TIC Tac kills breath get it
****Abstract Art his name is Abstrakt &
ABS is da beginnig of his name

CLOSER= MYSTIKAL's cd was called Lets Get Ready one of his songs was Been So Long

Even Tho Your Supposed To Spit First Here We Go..

Check It,

I'll 'Cut Off Ur BallSack' And 'Put In Stones' So U'll Kno Wut 'Cum Harder Means'..
If U 'Chopped Dowm Trees' And 'Grew Tha Limbs' U Wouldnt Be Able To 'Produce Green'..
U're Not 'On Top' Cuz Tha Last Time I 'Looked', I Wuz Tha One 'Gazin Down On Earth'..
Ah 'Spit Better Flames' Than Mah 'Son(Sun)' Cuz He's Still 'Rasin Up From Tha Dirt'..
This 'Kid's Losin His Money' So Go To A 'Homeless Shelter' Cuz U're Gonna 'Need Funds'..
U Still 'Slash Wit Brushes' But I'm An 'Artistic Murderer' Cuz I Kno How Ta 'Draw Guns'..
U'll Neva Be Able Ta 'Roast Beef' Cuz This Kid Keeps 'Losin His Dough' Like 'Greedy Chefs'..
If U 'Fought Tha War' And 'Killed Every Rapper' On 'Different Soil' U'd Still 'Never Be A Vet'..
U Should Call Me 'Courage Tha Dawg' Wit A 'Gat' Cuz Im Makin This 'Young Coward Bleed'..
If U Saw Me 'DriveBye U' And 'Spit Out Mah Shells' It Wouldnt Be 'Sunflower Seeds'..

shit my bad i never used this system so you did spit first my bad it just wouldnt show me your verse

Can we get some votes on this shit

CAn We Get Some Votes On This Shit Please ..............................................

Voted For: WORDPLAYA

yo dis goes to wordplaya, he had god struc, wordplay, and punches, he could of worked on vocab and mayb a lil more metas, um ur flow was decent and it all clicked wit the mystikal thing but the only thing is i would auggest elavatin on makin it more clear so you dont have to explain it at the end,

abstrak- dawg u had a pretty decent verse i was feelin yo shit but u need to work on struc man dont try to fiit all these things on one line jus keep goin wit it, also ur punches were a lil played but there were a few lines that struck my attention besisdes all that wordplay, vocab and flo was all pretty good but wasnt enough to get the W

v/ Wordplaya

yo yall return da favor man NO HATE sombodys gota loose!

vote wit me n blinkz thx peace GOOD BATTLE YALL!

yo they all fit i just couldnt change my font i usually make my verses in a smaller font so it was originally all on 1 line

I'll 'Cut Off Ur BallSack' And 'Put In Stones' So U'll Kno Wut 'Cum Harder Means'..
If U 'Chopped Dowm Trees' And 'Grew Tha Limbs' U Wouldnt Be Able To 'Produce Green'..
U're Not 'On Top' Cuz Tha Last Time I 'Looked', I Wuz Tha One 'Gazin Down On Earth'..
Ah 'Spit Better Flames' Than Mah 'Son(Sun)' Cuz He's Still 'Rasin Up From Tha Dirt'..
This 'Kid's Losin His Money' So Go To A 'Homeless Shelter' Cuz U're Gonna 'Need Funds'..
U Still 'Slash Wit Brushes' But I'm An 'Artistic Murderer' Cuz I Kno How Ta 'Draw Guns'..
U'll Neva Be Able Ta 'Roast Beef' Cuz This Kid Keeps 'Losin His Dough' Like 'Greedy Chefs'..
If U 'Fought Tha War' And 'Killed Every Rapper' On 'Different Soil' U'd Still 'Never Be A Vet'..
U Should Call Me 'Courage Tha Dawg' Wit A 'Gat' Cuz Im Makin This 'Young Coward Bleed'..
If U Saw Me 'DriveBye U' And 'Spit Out Mah Shells' It Wouldnt Be 'Sunflower Seeds'..

THERE I FIXED IT

UPPIN FOR VOTES

we still uppin 4 more votes
so cum give a honest vote
n i'll return one

Voted For: -Abstrakt-

fuck a Hotel it won't help u Get No Betta like Cassidy*
so bitch if i was him n he me; he wouldn't blast 4 me
^^^^^^^^ GOOD OPENER MAYNE NICE


a tragedy bout 2 happen ;stick 2 rappin X-Mas gifts
im 2 heavy n diss game 4 Beef u gonna need a Fork Lift
^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD PUNCH GOOD WORDPLAYS


u Abstrakt snapped kuz u was givin a break like KIT KATS**
4get dat i'll stab u in ya funky tongue so call me Tic Tac***
i split dat... 2 pieces of ~ART~ .....2gother now u APART****
play on words from da start ya ~ABS~ can't block ya heart
^^^^^^^^^^ AIGH AIGHT AIGHT GOOD VERSE HERE

AIGHT WORDPLAYA HAD WORDPLAYS (DUH) U HAD GOOD PUNCHES AND FLOW NICE VERSE MAYNE



I'll 'Cut Off Ur BallSack' And 'Put In Stones' So U'll Kno Wut 'Cum Harder Means'..
If U 'Chopped Dowm Trees' And 'Grew Tha Limbs' U Wouldnt Be Able to produce greens
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT MAYNE DIS AN GOOD OPENER LOL GOOD PUNCH

U're Not 'On Top' Cuz Tha Last Time I 'Looked', I Wuz Tha One 'Gazin Down On Earth'..
Ah 'Spit Better Flames' Than Mah 'Son(Sun)' Cuz He's Still 'Rasin Up From Tha Dirt'..
^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD PUNCH META'Z (HARD) (DECENT PUNCHES)

This 'Kid's Losin His Money' So Go To A 'Homeless Shelter' Cuz U're Gonna 'Need Funds'..
U Still 'Slash Wit Brushes' But I'm An 'Artistic Murderer' Cuz I Kno How Ta 'Draw Guns'..
^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD FLOW AND A PUNCH


U'll Neva Be Able Ta 'Roast Beef' Cuz This Kid Keeps 'Losin His Dough' Like 'Greedy Chefs'..
If U 'Fought Tha War' And 'Killed Every Rapper' On 'Different Soil' U'd Still 'Never Be A Vet'..
U Should Call Me 'Courage Tha Dawg' Wit A 'Gat' Cuz Im Makin This 'Young Coward Bleed'..
If U Saw Me 'DriveBye U' And 'Spit Out Mah Shells' It Wouldnt Be 'Sunflower Seeds'..
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD CLOSA AND GOOD VERSE


AIGHT ABSTRAKT GOT DIS BECUZ OF HARDER PUNCHES AND GOOD FLOWZ

WORDPLAYA-GOOD VERSE,,,,,,,,FLOWZ AND PUNCHES

DA PUNCHES WASNT HITTIN HARDER DAN ABSTRAKT,,,,,,,,I LIKE DA WORDPLAYS DOUGH KEEP IT UP MAYNE


~PEACE~

This was feedback posted for -Abstrakt-
 

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Voted For: -Abstrakt-

i have to give this one to Abstrakt...his punches and structure were better than wordplaya's...his closer is what did it 4 me tho..."If U Saw Me 'DriveBye U' And 'Spit Out Mah Shells' It Wouldnt Be 'Sunflower Seeds"...thats hott right there.

As for WordPlaya i can't really say anything except put a little more effort cuz this guy is out of your league...keep elevating.

HOLLA BACK!