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Verbal Abuse vs sHoTTaBoY
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6 - 20 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 40 Minutes Aight Verb? Wasnt Sure The Time U Wanted... Good Lucku, Pimpin Minimum posts to vote: 135 Check in by: 09-29-04 at 05:30 PM Must drop verse in 40 minutes after check in. |
sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-04 05:35 PM.
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I'ma Insert A ''Slug'' InTo Ya ''Dome'' To Get Rid Of The ''Blood Clot''..
This Lil Bitch Wouldnt ''Swing'' A ''Hard'' Punch If I Injected A ''Lead'Shot''.. Make Sure I Never Miss A ''Head'Shot'' An My Punches Leave Folk Wantin ''More''... I'ma Make You Swallow My ''Keys'' To Give U ''Lock'Jaw''... You Comin Up ''Dumb'' An ''Stuck Behind My Bars'' Thinkin Of Rhymes Doin ''Life With A Pen''.. U Went To Church n The Preacher Said ''Praize The Lord For My Sisters, AMEN''...So U Replied By Whippin Out Ya Dick With A Smile n Preachin ''Heeey Men!''.. Bitch, Your A Closet ''Queer''.. U Called Me Out, Well Next Time I Want A ''Midget'' To ''Interfere'' I'll Holla At ''Gary Coleman''...Ya Hear?!? Bastard, You Anticpate My ''Texts'' In ''Fear'' Switchin Off Ya ''Screen''... Cause U Know You Gon Be Left On ''DeathRow'' Like 'EILEEN' (Haha, Eileen In The Sig! not sure how ya spell it tho) The Only Way This Ever Gon Be A ''Truce'' Is If Ya Get Ya ''Knees Dirty''.. For Comittin ''Verbal Abuse'' You Gon Be Kickin ''Shit'spits'' On 'RV' Until Your At Least ''Thirty''..!!! |
I Lost my orginal verse cause my comp crashed, so i had to make do with this one
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by the way, no im not in the council no more.
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Verbal Abuse has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-04 11:37 PM.
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Prolouge:
your styles simply poor, them dashes n marks make you still half a newb. your trash is through, id prolly have a shitty 35-22, if i rapped as wack as you. Verse: clash hennesy til your dome shook, scatter your figure n chalk your face. must have his jock misplaced, cause i tossed ya in the basement like office space. only time ya airborn is in a rocket race, stop and trace before ya breath is mine. i consider you a sketchy affect, cause like christian beliefs...youll be left behind. leave the rest to crime. praying for positive hope statistics, like ocean thickness. your just another stomach pain to me, easily fixed like motion sickness. your to doped to get this. rip ya dermis n flesh so ya appear like ripe cherry carnage. seal you in a color coordinated bin, to specify that your primary garbage. shotta's rappin produces headaches to the extent kanye forgot his accident. bites rhymes so frequently, after keying a dopish verse i had to patton it. who knew what the council was thinkin, your worthless like a stolen accord. done shot this boy, left you as open wounded n holy as a bullentin board. |
Voted For: Verbal Abuse
shotta: you had some aight punches in there.. but ya structure is WACK.. stretched lines here and there.. every word starts with a capital.. quotation marks left and right... so damn hard to read?! ya flow was ok. va: neat easily read structure.. opener = dopeness .. almost all a ya punches connected.. cept for a few that didnt really hit hard but had madd flow.. nice metas.. VERY well executed multis. i wasnt kiddin when i said u should be multi queen lol one |
Voted For: Verbal Abuse
Verbal Abuse got it felt his better more vocab nice punches nice structure overall tyght flow good shit Shotta ya punches were koo coulda been harder lines were 2 stretched had 2 much shit added 2 fucked up ya verse but it was koo vote on da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Look, Its OBVIOUS You Fuckin Idiots Cant Understand My Rhymes, So Why Bother Votin?
Especially You ONE MAN BAND, Everytime I Battle Somebody Who Aint A Vet You Vote Against Me Bitchin About Quatotation Marks, WHEN ITS CALLE WORDPLAY AN THE WORDS THAT RHYME An You Can Clearly See ... < The Dots Are Where The LINE's FINISH, An Whats Wrong With Every Firrst Letter Capitol? He Didnt Have ONE CAPITOL Letter In There But Thats Okay? Whats The Diffrence, Stop Makin Excuses His Verse Was Punchline Less................. His Vocab Was Extremly Poor... An Personals WERE NOT On Point |
An A STOLEN ACCORD?
that line MADE NO sense what so ever Do yall even know what accord means |
accord is a honda ya indiot. uppin for votes on this dumbass.
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rofl, on this site...id be considered a vet more times than youll ever write punclines. dont go and open your mouth about whos vet and whos not, obviously you must have mistaken your position as "still elevating". so sit there in your chair and learn a thing or two by first closing your mouth and think before you open it again. cmon now, im better than you and im not even a vet yet. be serious shotta, your rhymes are foolish how you write all them dashes n quotaions ...nobody good does that any more, thats for newbs so we can try and tell what parts rhyme and which dont, the vets dotn have to add color or special affects for the viewers to uunderstand what the hell were talkin about. it just comes natural, slap yourself. |
Whatever Mayn
Them Votes Were Bullshit I NEVER ONCE SAID I WAS BETTER THAN YOU I know You Got Talent, But Ya Verse Wasnt THAT MUCH Better... But Whatever Mayn I Aint Trynna Beef, I Had More Complex Punches, An The LINES WERE NOT STRETCHED, An They Obviously Voted Cause They Didnt Understand The Lines I Posted, But Okay Mayn If Ya Win, U Win... Dont Be So Big Headed n All Like ''I'm Better Than You''...There The Comments Of A Bitch n Somebody Who Dosent Respect The World Of Rhyming n Stuff... I Aint Trynna Beef Wit'chu, I Was Just Pointin Out That Them <a href="http://www.ntsearch.com/search.php?q=People&v=56">People</a> Didnt Clearly Understand Some Of The Rhymes, An They Claimed It Was Stretched, When It Clearly Wasnt, I Was Tellin Them What The Structure Of My Rhymes Were About You Just Chil An Strop Trynna Patronize Me, Alright? Upppin Yall |
Upin this here bullshit yall..
dont sleep n we'll both return any honest votes p e a c e |
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