poison vs Most
 

Battle Rules:

6-10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Bullshit

G'Luck..

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-28-04 at 07:37 AM

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poison has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-27-04 06:39 PM.

yo im quick to roast MOST like toast/
cuz foes like him i turn to ghosts/
i'll burn u like a cd/
ur ugly like e.t/
u think ur good but ur sleazy and ur rhymes are easy/
u'd relize that if u see me/
ur rhymes are so wack/
where u came from is where u need to go back/
which is the gutter/
im smoother than butter/
i won this battle cuz all u do is studder.

Most has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-27-04 09:37 PM.

Heres another L for ya fagget :thumbup:

Fucka Poison.. Son Ill cut ya vital signs with a rhyme..
I seen ya shit too.. Predictable...Four word lines..
See this hoes gotta problem.. & Most'll Solve it fast..
Clothes'line' ya neck, stab you in the head with crow'bars'..
Call me death row, the way you got a planned fall in health..
Readin this shit, as I lethally inject you with yourself..
You makin cents? Is like homeless people fillin pockets..
Hearin ya rap, would make me wanna eject from plane cockpits..
Dude you should PM strobe.. & change ya alias son..
Your a known easy win.. So heres another L for poison..

Voted For: Most

yo im quick to roast MOST like toast/
cuz foes like him i turn to ghosts/
^^^^^^^^^^ WEAK

i'll burn u like a cd/
ur ugly like e.t/
u think ur good but ur sleazy and ur rhymes are easy/
u'd relize that if u see me/
ur rhymes are so wack/
where u came from is where u need to go back/
which is the gutter/
im smoother than butter/
i won this battle cuz all u do is studder.
^^^^^^^^^^^ WEAK NO DECENT PUNCHES,,,,,,LIL FLOW BUT NO DECENT PUNCHES

Fucka Poison.. Son Ill cut ya vital signs with a rhyme..
I seen ya shit too.. Predictable...Four word lines..
See this hoes gotta problem.. & Most'll Solve it fast..
Clothes'line' ya neck, stab you in the head with crow'bars'..
Call me death row, the way you got a planned fall in health..
Readin this shit, as I lethally inject you with yourself..
^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT SOMEWHERE AT DA END OF YO LINE IT DIDNT RHYMES BUT ITS COOL U HAD PUNCHES BETTA DAN POISON

You makin cents? Is like homeless people fillin pockets..
Hearin ya rap, would make me wanna eject from plane cockpits..
Dude you should PM strobe.. & change ya alias son..
Your a known easy win.. So heres another L for poison..


^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD VERSE BETTA PUNCHES

ALL CATEGORY BETTA DAN POISON

POISON USE DECENT PUNCHES YOURS WAS TOO BASIC

AND MOST FIX DA FLOW AT EVERY LINE (SOME) IT DIDNT RHYMED OK WORK ON DAT

BUT OVERALL U GOT DIS BECUZ U HAD BETTA VERSE DAN POISON

~PEACE~

Voted For: Most

poison: wacker than i come in wackness battles... fix ur complexity, flow, punches, ... everything

most: nice flow.. good punches.. coula hit a lil harder but they were aight.. more about killin him than punching.. but that was ok for this battle.. ya had some good wordplay.. like the opener..

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Voted For: Most

no contest... Most got him wit the first bar
"I seen ya shit too.. Predictable...Four word lines"
poison's flow was real basic and interestin-less.... made up a new wurd
Most had slick punceges and overall a better skill level

thanks for the votes........uppin this.............

Voted For: Most

Please.. This shit wasnt even close..
Most got it in every way..

Punches- Most
Flow- Most
Structure- Most

Poison, you gotta try a lil harder next time you battle bro.. But keep doin ya thing..

thanks.....uppin for more VOTES!

yo my rimes didnt have that many punches but have u heard of double rhymes?
well thats what it has

Voted For: Most

ok~
most~this was tight, you had good flow, nice, hard punches, and multies, and some great vocabulary, creative disses too, i was feelin this, strong opener, i liked the clothes line your neck and crow bars line,,,great wordplay...
poison~your verse was ok, very simple, but to the point, you could have taken this if you added more words to your lines, maybe a hard punch or two...but decent