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keen2B 09-27-04 08:48 AM

miricle rapper
 
i spit it with that miricle line
deliver my punches perfectly everytime
my vocabularay is elequently defined
mastermined and designed my own extrordinary ryhme
leave mc's in another time line

no-one parrallel to me not even perpendicular you see
im particular about my words never settle for inferiority
seeking superiority soon il have the majority
the rap verse will be mine, no longer will i be the minority
not many irish rappers battle'n unfortunetly
but it only takes one
like JET LEE'S 'THE ONE'
that one is me!




((((*uppin for feed back please
give your honest opinion
if its shit its shit
if its good its good

safe!

Ambient 09-27-04 09:02 AM

Sorry man But You Def Need To Elevate. That Was Real Bad. You Need To Work On Ya Structure. Couldn't Really Judge It Coz It Was So Short.

blazinlilmami 09-27-04 09:25 AM

waddup it was short but it was good the part that ya do have so keep workin on it


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