big GZ vs Premanition
 

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Check in by: 09-27-04 at 02:19 PM

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Premanition has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-27-04 01:50 PM.

big GZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-27-04 01:53 PM.

I’m a real emcee...and u just Webster’s definition
I sense u bout to lose...but thats just my premonition
u not fucking wit me...like a bitch wit and STD
but if u do...u know sooner or later...you’ll die eventually
shit gets drastic...but don’t take this loss personally
I rise to the competition...so u bring out the worst in me
ya punching like u "shadow-box" nuthing really hurts me
i'm worry-free...cuz nothing u say is disturbing me
so when u tryna take "L's" in other words losses
first take this one...and think fast cuz i'm tossing it

you already had no respect...didnt think it possible for a deduction....
but you proved me wrong by settin up a battle in emcees introduction....(*)
ur 'Big?'...well get some liposuction to bring you down to size....
hate nice guys...put my fist to ur face to c some darkness in ya eyes...
you battle newbs consistantly...got 5 wins now think u good instantly?...
no honestly ur plain wack...n ur only way out here is to not check in~frankly...
laugh at claims that ur records legit...impossible wiv ur level of wit...
Big all that illustrates to me is a straight jacket is ur daily outfit...

jus quik 8 lines

good battle...now lets get some votes flowing in so i can catch another win

Voted For: big GZ

it was an aight battle but a close aight battle


Big Gz: good structure, good flow, nice ryhme scheme, good play of his name, some multi's, few meta's, good personal, ok punches. 6.5/10


Premanition: good structure, good flow, few personals, aight punches, not really any multi's, few meta's, good play off his record. 5/10

Big Gz play off ya name got it for him


vote: Big Gz

return the honest votes, battles r in my sig

wtf.............................

uppin.....................

good looking for the "honest" vote...i will return the favor right now

Voted For: Premanition

wow.....
wellla

Gz:
lines were kinda short
punches were ok
but I knew you
what personals was gonna come from his name
so it wasn't really original
flow was good tho

strcuture coo too

Premanition:nice punches
and flow...structure wasn't that good
but I don't focus on that so much anymore
I enjoyed ur wordplay here the most
and that won it for you
nothin else stuck out
but nothin was wrong either

peace

alrite 1-1........................

uppin..........

Voted For: Premanition

Lyrics:prem
Opening:prem
ending:big
Personals:big
Originality:prem
Wordplay:prem
Punchs:prem

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Voted For: big GZ

Vote: big GZ

Lyrics: permanition
Multuies: neither
Perosnals: premanition
Rhyme: GZ
Punches: GZ
Orignality: tied
Wordplay: GZ..................thats just my premanition....bad ass opener punch
Opening: GZ
Ending: GZ
Structure: tied
Flow: GZ

Overall: a gd battle but GZ took this 1, wiv a bad ass openr and finisher and gd consistent punhcing. Peace...return tha favour look under my sig 4 links. Peace

wot eva..................fuck newb votes

uppin..