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On The Other Side - corrected structure
this is my correct structure for my verse, in "The Other Side" Ft. Proverse/Ruff Ryder
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Scenario's Verse
ya know that i rap for the kids slanging crack on the corner and for the ones struggling all the time with they back to the corner coming from where i'm from it seems like a different prespective treated like shit at times and even worse sometimes neglected if u could only see what i've seen, what's made tears flow from my eyes tragic events hit hard, but like seas under the sunset i try to flow with the tide i may not have it as bad as others but i got it bad enough to wanna kill myself no one understands me at all, so no one notices or hears my squeals for help if u were only me then u would know last year was my year of hell or so i dubbed it that sept.30 rocked me to the core, it hit heavy, my baby girl gone now who's gonna rub my back i may not come from compton where niggaz let them 40. cals throw clips of slugz or from towns or cities where niggaz sell out and are quick to grip dubs i'm from the south originally but now i straight rep for the east i come from the slums, no nikes so i walk around with sketchers on my feet money never meant much back in the day, but i'm older so i need it to survive too many sins in my life, niggaz show me no respect, i diss em so they want me crucified seeing my father shoot him self left me lonely, it took a chunk of me and left me empty inside none of these niggaz no what pain is, i stood there as the bullet entered his temple and want through his eye i know we all got our sob stories but my seems to be worse then others out here girls be having babies and babies, in other words giving births to mothers last years events cut my life open and left some open wounds niggaz out here dumb, they think they big cause they smoking shrooms i cherish life cause anyone could die from a stray slug or a broken womb people get mad when they secrets come out like ancient scrolls in an open tomb i try to think of it as my loved ones are on a trip but they'll be home soon steady perfecting my craft and trying to progress in skill peeps out here be over dosing on meds but where's the rest of the pills the streets of dover may not be as tough as west side or any other streets but just cause u got hot lyrics don't go thinking u above the beat in other words a gun and some dough don't put u above the streets |
uppin for this, this is my verse from the collab with proverse and ruff ryder, i had to fix the structure, drop some honest feedback
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On The Other Side - Corrected Structure
uppin for honest feedback, i'll return the favor
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uppin for more feedback peeps
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HOly fucking siht
ohhh i though this was another one of your open mic.. damn you gts allot |
uppin for more feedback peeps
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