School Lesson
 

punch your library card and brush up on your vocab skills
i brings more death than coke-lab-kills
we both pack thrills - but dont lack skills
to get the zone all off the hinges
shoot up more rhymes than fiends use suringes
but your off by some inches
a mid emcee thats been-since
sometime before i met dude
but i knocked him off and had his whole set screwed
he lived on a farm
so i burned down the barns and raided through all hens
my slaughters last longer than a maybach benz
the cows are gone and the pigs are in the fryer
o.s.c.a.r. - i cooked em like mr. myer
and paraded the goats for higher
im THE greatest of all time
my lyrics on default rhyme
the sickest with 3 fault lines
dont cross em - you'll be far behind

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aight yo nice drop over all 8/10 i was totally feling it but the on line where you rhymed inches with been-since i wasnt feeling it just kinda seemed like u reworded it just so it would rhyme i liked the oscar line tho..nice drop man elevate and work on some structure cuz you have lines drawn out and some short keep it all together and itll be hot

i liked ya verse mate pretty good shit. 6.9/10

This started off dope . You used some good multi's . But it kind of died off toward's the end. you started nice and complex then sort of mellowed it down. Everything before. ... Lived on a farm was dope. Everything afterward's sort of lost it's hype.....
overall 7/10 .. pz

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