Diabolic_aka_134 vs Verbal Phenom
 

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Check in by: 09-28-04 at 09:38 AM

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Diabolic_aka_134 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-28-04 09:09 AM.

Verbal Phenom has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-28-04 09:13 AM.

If this was a chess game this move would b "check-mate"
jus like ya chance in fame all they say is son "your-fake"

The only phenom that u claim to b is your "foul-taste"
You only contain venom like a "brown-snake"

The only time your verbal is in "english-class"
Just shutup smoke ur herbal and "puff-puff-pass"

You a poser son your not the "Notorious-One"
Your faker than plastic coated "B.B-Gunz"

The colour of your nickname i "Silver-And-Gold"
The verb u b hearing begins wif a-l n its the only thing u "will hold"

You betta retire now while ur records "still-clean"
Or ill jus do the impossible n "spit-ur-spleen"

This rap game was just anutha "dream"
like a fat man walking 2 the store n buying whipped "cream"


Explanations:
fat men walking.. obviously a joke kuz they're steriotipically lazy
notorious one - his email address
silver n gold - his colours of his nick name

hopefully ull understand the rest

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its supposed to b
The colour of your nickname is "Silver-And-Gold" i missed the s in is

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Voted For: Verbal Phenom

one sided battle in my opinion,


Verbal Phenom: nice structure, nice flow, hot punches, good meta's, not really any multi's, hot opener, hot closer, no personals (try to use some) 7.5/10

fav line:"I'll Flip Ya Lid Like Opening A Can Of Coke Coz Boy You Know Ya "Shook"
You Couldn't Get A Winning Run If Ya Had Rockets Attatched To Ya Foot"


Diabolic: could have been better, nice structure except for one stretched line, flow was ok, weren't really feeling ya multi's, punches didn't hit that hard, meta's were kinda weak too, ya one personal was ok. 4.5/10


vote: verbal phenom


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Voted For: Diabolic_aka_134

Lyrics:134
Opening:134
ending:134
Metas:neither
Multies:neither
Personals:134
Originality:134
Wordplay:134
Punchs:134
as you can see it is 134 wit the win

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Voted For: Diabolic_aka_134

yeh wow this was not that great of a battle you both laced a lot and wasnt feelin either verse too much but diabolic had better personals and punches but wordplay for both coulda been a lot better
verbal-wasnt feelin your punches the were wack esp the those were really wak punches mayn you def need to elevate yur shit work on punches throw in multi's and personals also work on structure
diabolic-ive seen you drop better then this you shouldnt underestimate newbie's cuz you dont know if they hot or w/e so always be on top of your game...work on some punches i saw some multi's but they werent that great
both elevate on your stuff

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