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Nice show of potential here-- you included some pretty sick multi flips- the story was dope, you told a pretty dope story and I can see big things from you if you stick with this isht-- Said alot of shit, I like the line -- "bumpin old school wu in my headphones--- and flippin on some m-e-t-h-o-d shit, nice track... (drop feedback on at least 2 songs or phenom will probly close this) .......Work on how many syllables you try to fit into a line, and work a bit on ur pronounciation- 1.
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aight thanx dawg
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He ain't foolin.... *gets BAN finger ready* :gfy: -Phenom |
yeah yeah... power hungry... yeah i did all dat uppin for feed
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yo, i listened to this earlier, it was good, and refreshing to hear some new style to this, you had good flow, in this track, and i liked the content, it was a good vibing track.....1
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yeah u got potential,but u need to ununciate more,but i dont know might be da quality sounds kinda muffled...and yeah to spit too many syllables in a bar...sounds rushed..
anyways everything was mentioned.. keep spittin 1 |
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