keen2B vs bLiNkZ
 

Battle Rules: TOPICAL BATTLE
topic is "hip-hops thin line"...... so for all voters about how hiphop was just music at one stage now its all money and apperance.

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bLiNkZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-28-04 08:11 PM.

Remember the days when rhyme spittin was sacred?/
Hip Hop made givers 'n takers ... emcees 'n breakers/
But these days have changed it, plenty of fakers/
Hip Hop was contained ... until we escaped it/
Dollar bills have arranged it, a different perception/
Performers n' recorders be shiftin the tension/
Liftin their mention, exposing culture .. a drift of complexion/
Cripplin the next men to inhabit the ways/
Hip Hop is music, dance n' life .. are we attackin the craze?/
Lackin the age, we're backing a stage of money and pop/
Got the elements twisted, expression CDs too funny to cop/
Young minds have depicted the state of the phenomenon/
Like shit is black n' white, but real Hoppers mix their colors on/
Fixin other bonds ... Hip Hop is not just the past time/
You can taste, listen, see n' smell as your senses intertwine/
The lesson here's refined, and the uneducated blind/
I look at Hip Hop icons and see we crossed The Line/

keen2B has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-30-04 08:40 AM.

yo its hip-hops thin line
it was real now its faded into time
rade'ed by the pop culture
guess it was predestined
hip-pop would rise

man this brings a tear to my eye
witness'n the end of an era
only left with inferior ryhme

ja rule and murder inc would'nt dare
take a bite out CRIME,
they pussy dilated what ever happend to SHYNE,
only left with a 50cent piece
he aint even worth a fucken DIME.

every rappers pop but they heros in SOME EYES,
can't no-one see we witness raps DEMISE,
it should come as no SUPRISE
that rap is turnen pop,
look at nelly and justin timberflop.

give me a beat let state im antipop
fuck all the fake mcs weather your BLINKZ
or your not.
cause next time you BLINK
rap could come undone
it would be worse than being left in iraq without
a lethal weapon.


(yo i dont care if i win this or not just staten whats true
if yall dont like listen to rock music you faggots.)
do your thing blinks hommie!

This was feedback posted for bLiNkZ
 

LMFAO @ this kid rapping about Hip Hop being sacred when he's a biter

yo will u mother fuckers vote already for fuckm sake

Voted For: bLiNkZ

I Was Feeling Blinkz Verse Alot More.
First Of All Keen Ya Structure Was Bad Sorry. And Second Some Of Ya Lines Didn't Rhyme. Blinkz Vocab Was Better ..Alot Better. Ya Story Was Not Making Any Sense Time The Topic Was Off..................Nice Verse Blinkz Good Structure Flow Was Tight. Vocab Good. And You Kept On Topic. Good Peice.

Vote: Blinkz

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people please vote on this battle already c 'mon for fuck sake