RapVerse.com Community

RapVerse.com Community (http://community.rapverse.com/index.php)
-   Front Lines Battles (http://community.rapverse.com/forumdisplay.php?f=63)
-   -   Street poet vs Wicked One (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=152297)

~IiL PrOpHeT~ 09-28-04 10:14 PM

Street poet vs Wicked One
 
Battle Rules:

10- Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-28-04 at 10:44 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

System 09-28-04 10:27 PM

Wicked One has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-28-04 10:27 PM.

System 09-28-04 10:29 PM

Street poet has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-28-04 10:29 PM.

Wicked One 09-28-04 10:47 PM

You've seen to came to this site droppin heat...
But since then you've just constantly gotten weak...
I'm just startin' my demo CD,and you claim you gotta deal in tha works...
But at tha pace your rap games moving I'll drop an album first...
Your being 'faded' bruh,but this ain't no BK barber-shop...
But like hair clippers in an amatures hands I'm sure to scar your knot...
Your a fraud so your lyrial outputs get no applause...
When I cause your lyrics downfall by ripping off your balls...
Your not a violent guy so why try acting tough,you wack as fuck...
And no one on RV respects you as if that wasn't enough...


Hmm...Kinda rusty so .....theres mine....

~IiL PrOpHeT~ 09-28-04 10:59 PM

I’m soon TO CLAP YA FACE IN, bringin DOOM AND AMPUTATIONS//
Cut u in half leave u topless like HOOTER APPLICATIONS!//

poet’s the illest, i been patently waiting to hurt you. I'm slaying your verse// dude.'
Cause in these battles, I'm always "One Leg Up" like women’s shaving commercilas//

But now Voetsek’ll cast ya limbs take ya record blast ya wins //
Rock ya jaw so hard im gonna make u "glass ya chin"//

truth is, Your just a wack dude spittin, and its a fact, dude listen//
I got lyrics that 'Pop eyes'(Popeyes) like fast food chicken.//

Now wicked just Fuck Ya bitchin, ill make ya tummy and neck tuck n twist in//
then knock ya lights out like a old clumsly electricians//


ova uppin

God 09-29-04 10:53 PM

Voted For: Wicked One

pretty weak battle but i think wicked took this one

wicked
You've seen to came to this site droppin heat...
But since then you've just constantly gotten weak...
pretty decent opener
I'm just startin' my demo CD,and you claim you gotta deal in tha works...
But at tha pace your rap games moving I'll drop an album first...
decent
Your being 'faded' bruh,but this ain't no BK barber-shop...
But like hair clippers in an amatures hands I'm sure to scar your knot...
wasnt feelin it
Your a fraud so your lyrial outputs get no applause...
When I cause your lyrics downfall by ripping off your balls...
lol
Your not a violent guy so why try acting tough,you wack as fuck...
And no one on RV respects you as if that wasn't enough...
nice closer

street
I’m soon TO CLAP YA FACE IN, bringin DOOM AND AMPUTATIONS//
Cut u in half leave u topless like HOOTER APPLICATIONS!//
not really feelin this

poet’s the illest, i been patently waiting to hurt you. I'm slaying your verse// dude.'
Cause in these battles, I'm always "One Leg Up" like women’s shaving commercilas//
....i dont get it ..lol

But now Voetsek’ll cast ya limbs take ya record blast ya wins //
Rock ya jaw so hard im gonna make u "glass ya chin"//
decent

truth is, Your just a wack dude spittin, and its a fact, dude listen//
I got lyrics that 'Pop eyes'(Popeyes) like fast food chicken.//
nice

Now wicked just Fuck Ya bitchin, ill make ya tummy and neck tuck n twist in//
then knock ya lights out like a old clumsly electricians//
decent closer

pretty hard battle to judge but igive this one to wicked

nice job both

SubtleTee 09-29-04 11:09 PM

Voted For: Wicked One

I’m soon TO CLAP YA FACE IN, bringin DOOM AND AMPUTATIONS//
Cut u in half leave u topless like HOOTER APPLICATIONS!//
^ Not a good punch or rhyme

poet’s the illest, i been patently waiting to hurt you. I'm slaying your verse// dude.'
Cause in these battles, I'm always "One Leg Up" like women’s shaving commercilas//
^ Again, an alright punch but it doesn't really rhyme


But now Voetsek’ll cast ya limbs take ya record blast ya wins //
Rock ya jaw so hard im gonna make u "glass ya chin"//
^ Weak punch

truth is, Your just a wack dude spittin, and its a fact, dude listen//
I got lyrics that 'Pop eyes'(Popeyes) like fast food chicken.//
^ Hehe, I like it

Now wicked just Fuck Ya bitchin, ill make ya tummy and neck tuck n twist in//
then knock ya lights out like a old clumsly electricians//
^ Very stretched, alright punch


You've seen to came to this site droppin heat...
But since then you've just constantly gotten weak...
^ An alright opener

I'm just startin' my demo CD,and you claim you gotta deal in tha works...
But at tha pace your rap games moving I'll drop an album first...
^ Haha, nice punch

Your being 'faded' bruh,but this ain't no BK barber-shop...
But like hair clippers in an amatures hands I'm sure to scar your knot...
^ Oh shit, barber shop was hot

Your a fraud so your lyrial outputs get no applause...
When I cause your lyrics downfall by ripping off your balls...
^ A weak punch

Your not a violent guy so why try acting tough,you wack as fuck...
And no one on RV respects you as if that wasn't enough...
^ Haha, aight closer



Overall Wicked just punched much harder. His lines were nicer and more consistent. Prohpet was close but not quiet good enough. Stay Up

x-on 09-29-04 11:19 PM

Voted For: Street poet

1- Opener, the girls are not topless. put I see where you were going.

2- you lack in Vocab, Punchlines were alright.. I like your style tho man, Don't take this all as hate..

You get my vote.. " work on your flow"

Check out my battles X-on...

Keith Moon 10-02-04 11:21 AM

Voted For: Street poet

I’m soon TO CLAP YA FACE IN, bringin DOOM AND AMPUTATIONS//
Cut u in half leave u topless like HOOTER APPLICATIONS!//

ehhh good 6/10

poet’s the illest, i been patently waiting to hurt you. I'm slaying your verse// dude.'
Cause in these battles, I'm always "One Leg Up" like women’s shaving commercilas//
2/10

But now Voetsek’ll cast ya limbs take ya record blast ya wins //
Rock ya jaw so hard im gonna make u "glass ya chin"//

4/10
truth is, Your just a wack dude spittin, and its a fact, dude listen//
I got lyrics that 'Pop eyes'(Popeyes) like fast food chicken.//
5/10

Now wicked just Fuck Ya bitchin, ill make ya tummy and neck tuck n twist in//
then knock ya lights out like a old clumsly electricians//
6/10

23/50 points elevate fix ya structure...get some lfow going

You've seen to came to this site droppin heat...
But since then you've just constantly gotten weak...
3/10
I'm just startin' my demo CD,and you claim you gotta deal in tha works...
But at tha pace your rap games moving I'll drop an album first...
2/10
Your being 'faded' bruh,but this ain't no BK barber-shop...
But like hair clippers in an amatures hands I'm sure to scar your knot...
7/10
Your a fraud so your lyrial outputs get no applause...
When I cause your lyrics downfall by ripping off your balls...
4/10
Your not a violent guy so why try acting tough,you wack as fuck...
And no one on RV respects you as if that wasn't enough...
2/10

18/50 man hsake that rust off take a bath or sumtin

Barburyin 10-02-04 12:43 PM

Voted For: Street poet

ill took dis by jus a lil. he had sum better vocab n flow. his punches were pretty hot. needed sum more multi n the personals need a lil moire but al together he pulled on top

vote=ill

Killah 10-02-04 01:37 PM

Voted For: Wicked One

wicked your punches were aight, some hit nice,and then some didnt hit nice at all, your verse was well iam going say your verse was decent, your structure was good because it was easy to read so you got my vote for better structure & punches, but not by much

Ill- your punches were aight too but i have to say they were played, but some were aight like i said, but your structure but you had some strected lines man, but really you did good but just elevate man aight peace

streetryda 10-02-04 01:54 PM

Voted For: Street poet

aight man ill prophet got my vote
ill-you had some sick punches nice opener and closer nice flow all together i liked your wordplay and multis nice drop man didnt see many personals tho but i liked the style and it was an easy read nice

wicked-aight man u had a nice verse too but i saw too much self glorifying and i dont like that too much nice punches and perosnals tho man but prophet just pulled infront cuz he had a better oppener and closer i liked your flow but the wordplay coulda bell a lil better

v/ill prophet

~Lady Fiya~ 10-02-04 02:19 PM

Voted For: Street poet

I’m soon TO CLAP YA FACE IN, bringin DOOM AND AMPUTATIONS//
Cut u in half leave u topless like HOOTER APPLICATIONS!//
^best opener, lmfao......... nice..

Now wicked just Fuck Ya bitchin, ill make ya tummy and neck tuck n twist in//
then knock ya lights out like a old clumsly electricians//
^best closer nice metas... hard punch....

Street Poet- had the harder hittin' punches... better metas and wordplay...... Wicked One you didn't came very hard in this battle.. but ur drop wasn't bad at all, in example i liked ur bar that said:
Your being 'faded' bruh,but this ain't no BK barber-shop...
But like hair clippers in an amatures hands I'm sure to scar your knot...
^very nice...... but ur verse didn't come hard like street's did, so that's why i give him the vote... better punches and vocab too...... good luck with this.....
~Lady Fiya~


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 08:35 AM.