**Deep Song - Love Is Far Away**
 

Decided to change up styles a little....a little slower than I'm used to, but I wanna see what kinda feedback I get from this. It's a pretty deep song, so don't rip me too much :thumbup:

Love Is Far Away

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yea this is more my style..... i was feelin this to the fullest..good job.. liked the flow.. quotable "didnt care what i grew up to be, justa as long as it wasent like them".... felt that the most.. good job... i really liked this shit..you got some nice lyrics... stay up -1

beat is aight... Kinad weird harpish sound, but it smoothed out. ooooOOOooo nice sample. :) OOOOH - you killed the first verse man. ON POINT. Heart felt man. I'm liking the steps this site is taking evolving with depth lyrically and not just battling cats. Second verse a little choppy flow wise, but stuck with the realness. You startin to polish ya flow a bit more. Good looks on being a dad there for ya kid.

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Bro...lol send me this beat dammit..lol is nice
flow was good felt of at times on the beat, quality Umm Garbage like mine.....actually a lil betta..lol delivery could be lil stronger vocals could be upped. but lyrics are good...


Blah!! u kno i got to drop a feed.

Thanks guys.....upping for a little more feedback :thumbup:

overall real nice drop mayne... good emotion.... good beat for the song... nice drop keep it up...

This was pretty good- I usually hate alka beats, but I liked this one, vocal sample was pretty dope- flow matched the beat- i like the story for the most part, but it seemed like the topic kinda switched up from beginning to end- not a bad track... be safe.

yea just dropping another feed... shit was tight.. first verse was fucking dope... alca fuckign killed on this beat man.. this shit should be published... he shoulld get payed for that one..

This beat is ill, and the sample, wow, your delivery on this was great, actually better then i've heard from you,,,hmm, damn, your content and lyrics were awesome, you rode the beat well in this, i can tell you still have a comfort level to reach with the mic, as do i,,,but nice second verse...you knew where to end it, nice 3rd verse as well,this might not make sense cus i'm writing as i listen, so i'm sorry,lol, as long as you get the point....good shit!!