LyriCal HavoK vs TitoBronsky
 

Battle Rules:

12-15 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-02-04 at 12:25 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

TitoBronsky has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 12:26 PM.

LyriCal HavoK has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 12:51 PM.

This Kid hopped on this site...like a wetback ova a border-1
ill give him a loss wit bad luck...but im no salt ova a shoulder-2
tito, ya ideas and lyrics are runnin out like the ozone layer-3
i create the same havok, n'stead of trees i put wins on da conveyer-4
rhymes sound as free as products from online popups or even air-5
everybody takes one look at it and closes it as if they even care-6

this dudes a big baby a bit lady on the low
cats 15, and his pubic hairs starting to grow
often a foe under-estamates the impact that i hold
infact i am known to cause havok on the microphone
lyricaly your unequiped for the little leauges
im spiritualy capable of making you piss your jeans
My mentals enough to stop your ramblings
trains of thought de-rail, so indeed hail an ambulance
you go to school daily, dressed in old navy
get geeked on, and say its a sweater my momma gave me
theres nothing lyrical about you except the name
so depart back to the sac from whence you came

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Voted For: TitoBronsky

hey dog you killed him....you had better personal punches...flowed better...and just came a lil bit nicer...nice job...1

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Voted For: TitoBronsky

kinda weak punches...flow was iight....but you got da otha guy in dis battle...u had da betta flow...and better structure on dis....return da motha fuckin favor son.....
me vs. lyrical madnes like is below
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=151718

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