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NewKid 09-29-04 12:42 PM

Juss A Freestyle
 
I Aint Tha Type Of Nigga That Fight,juss Smash Ya Head N Tha Hood Get Chopped By Tha Starter...
"cum" Harder Cus I Get More "head" Then A Barber..

Selliin Dimes Pricks Talk Bout Yall On Ya Grind..but Ya Starvin..
Wass On Mih Belt Gone Let Yall Melt Like Margarine...


Im Tha Numba 1 Kid Like Billy..claim Philly..(billy Tha Kid)
Put A "trick" On A Box If She Dipped On Tha Cock Like She "silly"

Fa Get Ya Click..yall Pricks Can Catch More Tips Then A Waiter..
Sit Back Hater..cus Wiin Tha Bells Ring Wake Ya Bitch Ass Up Like Zack Slater...

Like School U Can Hate It..im Tha Greatest..
If A "pussi" Say His Flow "tite" Then He Need Ta B Lubricated..

Checked Up..guess Wat,i Have U On Tha Cement Tryin Ta Keep Ya Breath Up..have U Missin Ya Team Like Wiin Ray Left Bucks...

Clown Wiin Im N Town,like A Grabbin A Rebound Keep Ya Hands Up..
Cus If Tha Grams Fucked,leave U Without A Kidney Like Ya Sick Granmahh..keep Writin Cus I Know Ya Idolin,ask Any Question I B Like Iverson N B Ya "answa"

*tha Last Line Hands Up,grams Fucked,granmahh,answa They All Rhyme Iss Juss How U Say Em*

NewKid 09-29-04 12:45 PM

Yoooooooooooooooooooooo...

Uppin Fa Some Feedback

Simple Sage 09-29-04 01:33 PM

aight champ when i say elevate you got an aight scheme...but you used a cum line...this is 2004..bout to be 2005...no more...try being a lil more creative with your punches...look at stuff all around you...make connections...try to go a lil deeper with you words..hope im some help

Ice Pick 09-29-04 02:01 PM

Poop

Work On Your Flow

Wordplay

And Basically Stop Recycling Old Gangsta Shit

That Was Wack

Ice Pick 09-29-04 02:02 PM

Are You Shottaboy

Have Similar Styles And Structre And All The Other Shit

NewKid 09-29-04 09:18 PM

Iight I Cee Yall Sack Suckin...but Uppin Fa Some Feedback


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