Sage in "How to breathe through the disease"
 

Say we live in a cold world that's irrelavant...
seldom it's the cell that fits when im one with my element...
I felt it gets a bit fridgit(sp) when im finished
with my food for thought brought a new exsistence
used my sweat to wash the dishes man i hope you listen
matter o fact lend me your ears i'll pay you back plus commission...
all i got is my fists its...busy cuffing my testicles
what make you think you special get crushed with your pedestal
Now walk it off Hop-a-long..no not your name that's how you leaving
Sage/Demon...man vs the machine was how he learned to breathe in
don't think i was manufacuture how can i say i broke the mold
I refuse to believe that God mass-produced my soul
So we roll to a conclusion used to my words being hollow see...
I blind to the truth you need a leader follow me...

blah...if you can't catch the flow i got audios in the sig..wanted to see if i can still do text
-replied to NewKid

this is good! you have some good rhyme's in it. The flow is str8 forward. But Im gonna go check the audio aswell. nice drop man keep elevating....pz

damn uppin.....

this wuz hott, i lyked the rhymes and the shit u put togetha.

Nice Metaphorz, in the 5th and 6th lynez.
I think it needs a little more stucture/ but otha than that its hott!
Nice jOb.
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..sHaIi..

hmmm...can i get an up..some returned favors maybe