x-on vs genocide
 

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-05-04 at 11:54 AM

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genocide has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-30-04 12:10 PM.

nickel you aint worth that much//
if u like his shit u smoked too much dutch//
his mama the only women he touched//
not saying he ugly but he sleep in a cage//
like an aminal this bitch got me in a rage//
u dont like violance talk//
well u gonna hate when i spit through my double gauge//
thats not yours//
thats a mobb deep phrase//
stop stealing verses and lines//
before i shoot u up multiple times//
and if ya ask him his jail record//
he say he been to jail 9 times//
but in all reality he commited 0 crimes//
if you sold your rhymes u'd get cash back//
shut up before i finish this and put u back on the rack//
even with a olypic champion he couldnt run on a track//
flows, punches, brains just some of the shit your stuff lack//
i won this battle and it aint a question its a fact//

sorry just a quick keystyle

i know it aint up to standerds

hey where you at you said that youd drop last night man come on and drop

bull shit
 

hey where you at you said that youd drop last night man come on and drop

x-on has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-01-04 04:11 PM.

Ayo, X- on baby.. Shine amazing.. here we go..

Occuaptin:" Murda " yeah that's cause you do it like it's your day to day shit so don't speak/
Your rhymes are "garbage" eating them will leave me feeling sick and weak//
From: "Hell" yeah that's cause people think negative of you and you under"da"ground/ (not underground)
X-on like Heaven where people look up and make you abay by my sound// (aka obey the bible)
Your rhymes been stolen like the land of the natives from Christopher Colubus/
Brutal styles, couldn't find this rap world if it came with a copus//
leave you negative like I stoll all your "negatice" Electron"/
can't touch my rhymes like a 5 year saving bonds//
White boy, You must be that cat from "Malibus most wanter right"?/
Either that or they let mental handicap people on this site that can't write//
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The break down...
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.:. His profil sais his occuptain is "murda" so I say that his is ocupation...
.:.Profil sais he is from hell, and people speak bad about "hell" and people look up to heaven, or the sky.. people look down, aka down apon something, so down to him...
.:.C, columbus stole Canada from the native people.
and rap.. bla bla... you know it i'm sure.
.:.In science you have electrons, when you take one electron out, then that becomes a negative electron... And once you have a saving bond plane you can't touch it..
.:. Malabu, is a movie, with a whit guy.. haha and he is the worst rapper, they make fun of the guy.. In other words " comedy movie.. ps.. no hate to handicaps..

hahah , nice try man.. But up your vocab.. you had no punches at me..

Yo riped this shit on this battle, I know people are going to vote on this one. please!!!

Need to up this battle.. Need more votes.. please holla back.

this is fucking stupid.. I have so many battle and no votes.. what's wrong with people. check them out. let's go! VOTE

uppin this battle boys we need votessssssssssssssssssssssss

uppin this battle boys we need votes on this shit

uppin this bull shit battle niccas

Voted For: genocide

easy wins 1sided

punches-geno
met-none
pers-gen
mul-none
stukta-geno(none of um was exactly good but he gets it)
gen wins this he had punches that landed unlike the other guy he had a cuple and didnt rly land
pz

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