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Houdini 09-30-04 04:43 PM

|Kopietz|
 
People try-ta fight me tryin to strike my year's
And all these heartless people tryna hide-they-tears
But as bloodshed's we all let our heart's Go down in dirt'
Just cause they're gone, dont mean there soul stays in the earth

Just hear me out, Cuz this whole place is hurtin'
Got hookers runnin there day job's, and fuckin hoes flirtin'
All these playas try 2 act', But this scene has no curtains'
Wreckage with a smile, Smoke come's out why he's smerkin'

Rap isnt about these newb's or "sworn vets"
Come to My hood and try to talk some sense
Come out with a new access whole to ya chest'
Seein people die, Hoping I could get that blessed

But in the end it's fate and crazily' Happens ery'day
Only time I have alone is when My hands cross b4 I pray
God please hear me, My dream's are solid-shit
Hanging out with "hitmen", Not even rappers but man they make some "hits"


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If I injected Myself with lead' would it be suicide to you'
Wanna be in a room with a suicidal Guy you'knew
Wishing You can leave but he has a fucking gun to
Tryna run away and all these bullets flying at-chu

Make a break for the stairs'Why is he like this?
Shootin lead at me asking, Why u trying 2 hide-kid'
God please get this guy the fuck away from me
Im running my nut's off, But like duracell I have no "everlasting"Energy

He finally caught me, and asked me one thing I wanted 2 say b4 I die'
Please shelter Me from the demons deep inside.....
I woke up in a hospital, and I never left my house'
What kinda dream did I have, And why is my cock'hangin' Out?


Lmao

Peep this


The last lines a twist

Ysdat 09-30-04 05:17 PM

THIS IS DOPE AZ FUCK!!! you got somthing solid here. your rhyme's are on point aswell as you flow. The meaning to the whole peice is dope....... nice drop . keep them coming..pz

Houdini 09-30-04 07:42 PM

Fuck yea man Thanx for the feed Ill return the favor bro Uppin

Houdini 09-30-04 10:05 PM

uppin lol i want peeps 2 see this

Houdini 10-01-04 07:11 AM

Uppin! Damn dont sleep on this......dont sleep

Critic 10-01-04 08:21 AM

That was hottt man,,....

But as bloodshed's we all let our heart's Go down in dirt'
Just cause they're gone, dont mean there soul stays in the earth
^Nice I like that bit predictable but nice hit hard^

But in the end it's fate and crazily' Happens ery'day
Only time I have alone is when My hands cross b4 I pray
God please hear me, My dream's are solid-shit
Hanging out with "hitmen", Not even rappers but man they make some "hits"
^Nice barz man hott drop and the close was funny as fuck stay up man...

1~

Houdini 10-01-04 10:51 AM

Thanx fer the feed man, Uppin

Houdini 10-01-04 04:00 PM

uppin for feed .

atti? 10-01-04 04:41 PM

???...
I Dont Really Get Why Its Getting That Much Love...
Here's How I See It...
You Show POTENTIAL, But Just Simple Things Could Make It Better...
One Of The Biggest Things Would Be Flow...
People Were Saying Your Rhyms Were On Point But I Dunno What Point That Would Be....
You've Gotta Tryn Use A Two Word Multi Scheme Atleast At The End...
And Try To Slip It In And Intwine It Throught Out The Whole Line...
Cuz If You Do That And You Perfect That...
You Start To Add Two Multi Sequences Into It And Just Have The Different Patters Switch Off...
Making The Flow Just Very Contagious...
Cuz To Me I Couldnt Really Feel The Flow...
To Me Flow Isnt Right Unless You Can Flow It WITHOUGHT A Beat...
Just My Thoughts Mayn...
Keep Doing It Though, I Can See You Getting Bigger The More You Elevate...
.One.

Houdini 10-01-04 08:13 PM

Thanx man Not everyone see's it that way Uppin

Houdini 10-02-04 09:58 AM

Uppin This.....................................

~IiL PrOpHeT~ 10-02-04 10:22 AM

God Damn Dat Is Hot Lol

I Like It Mayne Dis Shit Is D.o.p.e

Keep It Up I C U Elevate

Dis An Dope Solid Piece Keep It Up Wreckage Dats Hot~!

~peace~

SkOtEe 10-03-04 10:16 AM

thats a good drop man, nothing much else to say but keep doing ya thing!!

Abraxas 10-03-04 11:54 AM

NOt as dope it looks like you tryede to put potential in it but wen its really read its iiight but not as good didnt really get the titel but it was iight you really elevated since you came here nice shit

rating 6/10

Houdini 10-03-04 03:11 PM

uppin for feed lol


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