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Yvonne 10-01-04 11:40 AM

Limited Edition vs Yvonne
 
Battle Rules:

8 -10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Beef


gd luck...

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 10-04-04 at 11:40 AM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

System 10-01-04 11:55 AM

Yvonne has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-01-04 11:55 AM.

Yvonne 10-01-04 12:24 PM

You thinking to win this bitch shows u got it twisted
Blasphamig in ya spit…son u got ur death edition listed*
dogs only bite,ur ghost shud be ready 2 write,u a vet?is a lie
so do us a fav&decline dis fight,cos u could hurt sum1's eye
ur punches would neva stand even if they were on ego
cos u still gatta pack heat from yve...the vol-ca-no
ur rec has been geled,reseting it was stupid,cos ur skills got a limit**
my clocks ticking i aint got time to waist,sit bak& c ya loss come in a minuite

* his name..edition

**^^...



ya dont get my verse fine...dont vote thanx...


we will hit urs too..........1

System 10-01-04 05:07 PM

Limited Edition has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-01-04 05:07 PM.

L.E 10-01-04 05:16 PM

...A'yo...

Now I am up against a girl, but I'ma rock this bitch's world...
She a'in' dope, only way she sick is when sickness hurled....
Now I got you scared, well hoe, you should been prepared...
Jaw dropped and stared, well if you was hot, I may have cared
I haven't seen a picture, but if Eve ya sig, I'ma be a ditcher...
But sayin' you dope, is sayin' a martini doesn' have a mixture
I mean no offense, girl, but you better get a lil' common sense
You be like 50 Cent, if you think you can merk me...

...That's Ordinary Nonsense...

Quick...whatever...goodluck...

Yvonne 10-01-04 05:55 PM

oh dear so u waited for me to get my siggy first for a personal?.....wow



upping this peeps

Archeologist 10-01-04 06:46 PM

Voted For: Yvonne

You thinking to win this bitch shows u got it twisted
Blasphamig in ya spit…son u got ur death edition listed*
Ok wouldn't of used as an opener
dogs only bite,ur ghost shud be ready 2 write,u a vet?is a lie
so do us a fav&decline dis fight,cos u could hurt sum1's eye
Hell no that was bad
ur punches would neva stand even if they were on ego
cos u still gatta pack heat from yve...the vol-ca-no
Pretty good hit quite hard
ur rec has been geled,reseting it was stupid,cos ur skills got a limit**
my clocks ticking i aint got time to waist,sit bak& c ya loss come in a minuite
Best bar had me laughing

Now I am up against a girl, but I'ma rock this bitch's world...
She a'in' dope, only way she sick is when sickness hurled....
Played or what man
Now I got you scared, well hoe, you should been prepared...
Jaw dropped and stared, well if you was hot, I may have cared
No that was a filler
I haven't seen a picture, but if Eve ya sig, I'ma be a ditcher...
But sayin' you dope, is sayin' a martini doesn' have a mixture
Decent punch
I mean no offense, girl, but you better get a lil' common sense
You be like 50 Cent, if you think you can merk me...
No what was that man realy?

Yvonne took this for 2 punches.
Pz.

Yvonne 10-02-04 08:56 AM

uppin this peeps

~IiL PrOpHeT~ 10-02-04 10:15 AM

Voted For: Limited Edition

You thinking to win this bitch shows u got it twisted
Blasphamig in ya spit…son u got ur death edition listed*
^^^^^^^^^^^^ AGIHT GOOD OPENER NICE PUNCH

dogs only bite,ur ghost shud be ready 2 write,u a vet?is a lie
so do us a fav&decline dis fight,cos u could hurt sum1's eye
^^^^^^^^^^^^ HA GOOD PUNCH NICE

ur punches would neva stand even if they were on ego
cos u still gatta pack heat from yve...the vol-ca-no
ur rec has been geled,reseting it was stupid,cos ur skills got a limit**
my clocks ticking i aint got time to waist,sit bak& c ya loss come in a minuite
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD OPENER AND NICE PUNCHES AND GOOD CLOSA

YVONNE-HAD GOOD PUNCHES AND GOOD FLOW KEEP IT UP





Now I am up against a girl, but I'ma rock this bitch's world...
She a'in' dope, only way she sick is when sickness hurled....
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD OPENER AND GOOD PUNCH

Now I got you scared, well hoe, you should been prepared...
Jaw dropped and stared, well if you was hot, I may have cared
^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD PUNCH (DECENT)

I haven't seen a picture, but if Eve ya sig, I'ma be a ditcher...
But sayin' you dope, is sayin' a martini doesn' have a mixture
I mean no offense, girl, but you better get a lil' common sense
You be like 50 Cent, if you think you can merk me...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD CLOSA

LIMIT EDITION-ALTHOUGH I HATE U- U HAD GOOD&HARDER PUNCHES AND NICE FLOW'Z GOOD STRUTURE AND GOOD WORDPLAYS


LIMIT EDITION GOT DIS BECUZ HE HAD HARDER PUNCHES AND NICE WORDPLAYS AND GOOD FLOW

YVONNE- GOOD BATTLE,,,,,,,,,,GOOD VERSE U HAD FLOW'Z AND PUNCHES BUT I THINK LIMIT EDITION CAME HARDER

IF U HAD MORE LINES U'LL PROP GET LIMIT

V-LIMIT EDITION FO WORDPLAYS AND HARDER PUNCHS

~PEACE~

Keith Moon 10-02-04 11:04 AM

This was feedback posted for Limited Edition
 
cant vote cuz A.I but

Le came harder I feel...his verse was ok...maybe he didnt come as hard as he oculd

Yyvone...ya fine girl but......ya need to practice punches....

start readin poppa kap e looch n them

start writing laot..use big vocab and itll get stuck in ya had...I forgot how I elevated but this is the method thats used alot...

Keith Moon 10-02-04 11:06 AM

belh edit mine.....Really readin tha verses...IO felt Yyvone came a lil harder....she had pucnhes with energy like hse tried...LE's were so bland..bleh....

Yvonne 10-02-04 05:12 PM

lol confused so is it a vote or still a feedbak????



uppin peeps

Parallel 10-02-04 05:34 PM

Voted For: Yvonne

yvonne came a lil hard she ahd better punches and stcutre i think she won lol but ya thats my vote anyway lol

Limited Edition:
you have potential man nice vocabulary but i feel yvonne came harder you had some nice punches aswell but not hard enougj you talk to much shit about yerself and droping n shit lol and yer style was fucked coulda been better

Yvonne:
she just cam harder period lol she had way better punches and wordplay and she realy said shit about her oppenent more then limited edition.

VOTE: Yvonne

~Luciano~ 10-02-04 05:43 PM

Voted For: Limited Edition

Cant vote but good battle from both



*Nods hat*

Removed

~Luciano~ 10-02-04 05:44 PM

oops i meant 2 put feedback

edit that


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