onetimekilla vs ProVerse
 

Battle Rules:

6-10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

due tommorow
cuz i'm gettin some shit recorded

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-04-04 at 08:53 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

ProVerse has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-01-04 09:03 PM.

onetimekilla has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-01-04 09:04 PM.

You wanna delay time cause you aint shit,
So ima go to your house and lick on ya girls clit.
I'm somebody with who you dont wanna spit,
Cause you know you will get your fuckin throat slit.
You wanna mess with me I'm the best,
Hollows I load penetrate through your bullet proof vest.
You crazy puttin me to the test,
You the type that gets caught for lovin your sister, they call that incest.
You are startin to sweat from your sweat glands,
Cause you realize that I could beat you typin with less than two hands.
I be the one destroyin your plans,
Beatin you over the head with some motherfuckin cookin pans.
When the shells drop you wonder why your chest is burnin,
I spit the hottest, you need to be learnin,
This is free, I aint here to be earnin,
After hearin a white man flow, the color of your skin you wanna be turnin, be the color white.
Because when I type, i give you some fright.
So before I send you on this dead end flight,
The last thing I say is good night.

I recently changed my name so....

Of cource i had to post again cuz
i couldn't even see your verse

Voted For: ProVerse

flow-B.L.A, much more together, one times lines some were stretched and some were too short, bla got this aspect easy

punches/personals-b.l.a, much more creative personals and a lot harder hitting onetime you gotta work at this, your punches are playeddd, and didnt hit, they felt like a normal 50 cent verse..., actually i think 50 sucks more then that but thats beyond the point, u kno what im sayin they were played and deliver personals instead of makin so many threats, no hate though, you tried

creativity-b.l.a like said above much more creative punches

no hate on nobody pretty much one sided battle good luck to both peace

thanks for the votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!


uppin

Voted For: ProVerse

i think bla won dis for his betta structure and flow. he also had more and better personal punches
v/bla

uppin for votes

Voted For: ProVerse

B.L.A. took this no doubt
ONETIMEKILLA Weak Shit

Opener-BLA
Closer-BLA
Multis-BLA
Vocab-BLA
Wordplay-BLA
Punches-BLA
Personals-BLA
Metas-BLA
Flow-BLA
Structure-BlA

Overall Fav Lines-
B.L.A="OTK cuts and paste lyrics but doesn't OwnTheKnife
your lyrics aren't worth shit,yo punchlines owe a price"

onetimekilla-"NONE"

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This was feedback posted for ProVerse
 

just want to see da polls since u in my crew dog...good spit tho 4-real my nigga..

Voted For: ProVerse

ha ha. this was a lop-sided win. that "killa" kid aint have 1 real punch in his whole verse. all his attempted punches were played, his structure and flow was messed up. b.l.a verse was good. he had everything punches, flow. its obvious vote for b.l.a

Voted For: ProVerse

Opener - Proverse, the other guy dissed himself.. proverse, was a nice punch too..

Flow - pro verse, better transitions..


punches - pro verse, time killa barley had any..
structure - pro verse, more st8 lines, way more paralell..

wordplay - pro verse', it just sounded better when said..

closer - pro verse.. a more clever ending..


Basically proverse took it in every category,.. nice job from both, but BLA gets this, wun..

return honest vote right here cuz,THANX.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=152757