MC_PHELA vs ~{ExClusive}~
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes!


Minimum posts to vote: 60

Check in by: 10-04-04 at 09:43 PM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

MC_PHELA has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-01-04 09:47 PM.

~{ExClusive}~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-01-04 09:48 PM.

I make herbs like “MC_PHELA” fall like rocks and stones, to make you twitch and studier…
No need to brag but im winnin cuz im smooth like a “big brick of butter”/
Your like a annoying disease that’s spreading fast probably most likely "salmonella"…
You probably runnin scared already snitchin like the movie “Cinderella”/
Ta, you so fake wackest ever, that I met on RV what can I do your so immature…
Ill infect yer brain with my deadly lyrics, your gonna need to check the calender/
Fuck your like a disease rollin threw the streets you think yer madly bustin…
You must be outta yer mind thinkin that, cuz your like “kane” its so disgustin/

explaintion:
K big brick of butter is like it melts fast and im smooth like butter sliden get it?
Salmonella is the illness you get form raw meat get it?
Cinderella the movie get it?
Kane from wwe the wrestler hes got scares well not realy but hes still ugly lol get it?

Yo, This Fool Is 14 And He Is So Illusive,
Thinking He's Gon' Beat Me With Da Name Exclusive,
Dat Name Aint For U Your More Like An Abussive,
Child Melested And Punked Into Reclusive,
Here Let Me Give You A Tip Young One,
Dont Mess With Older Kids Cuz You Already Know Who Won,
Phela Is My Name Remember It Good,
Cuz Dats Da Dude Dat Beat U With Da Botom Of His Foot,
So Say Bye Bye To Da Rest Of Da Rappers,
Cuz Im Gon' End This Givin U A Box Of Huggies Pampers.

Your Next Young One<----------------

nice verse man i thought it was all crap but you came super hto on yer closener lol

U Got Some Tight Verse Too Dawg
Anytime U Wanna Battle Hit Me Up. Peace.
Ddddddfi Bbbbbar

uppin vote people vote vote vote vote...............

Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~

punches : exc
personals : tie
structure: both need work
flow: exc
vocab/wordplay : exc
overal : exc

v/exclusive...just came harder

Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~

aight heres da break down



make herbs like “MC_PHELA” fall like rocks and stones, to make you twitch and studier…
No need to brag but im winnin cuz im smooth like a “big brick of butter”/
Your like a annoying disease that’s spreading fast probably most likely "salmonella"…
You probably runnin scared already snitchin like the movie “Cinderella”/
Ta, you so fake wackest ever, that I met on RV what can I do your so immature…
Ill infect yer brain with my deadly lyrics, your gonna need to check the calender/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT U HAD GOOD PUNCHES NICE WORDPLAYS AND FLOW

Fuck your like a disease rollin threw the streets you think yer madly bustin…
You must be outta yer mind thinkin that, cuz your like “kane” its so disgustin/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD CLOSA

AIGHT EX

U HAD MULTI'Z WORDPLAYS FLOW AND DECENT PUNCHES


Yo, This Fool Is 14 And He Is So Illusive,
Thinking He's Gon' Beat Me With Da Name Exclusive,
^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD OPENER BUT NOT BETTA DAN EX NICE PUNCH THOUGH

Dat Name Aint For U Your More Like An Abussive,
Child Melested And Punked Into Reclusive,
Here Let Me Give You A Tip Young One,
Dont Mess With Older Kids Cuz You Already Know Who Won,
Phela Is My Name Remember It Good,
Cuz Dats Da Dude Dat Beat U With Da Botom Of His Foot,
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD PUNCH NICE FLOW

So Say Bye Bye To Da Rest Of Da Rappers,
Cuz Im Gon' End This Givin U A Box Of Huggies Pampers.
^^^^^^^^^^ NOT REALLY AN GOOD CLOSA


AIGHT BREAK DOWN

MC

U HAD FLOW PUNCHES

IN MY OPINION EX GOT DIS BECUZ HE HAD DECENT AND HARDER PUNCHES AND GOOD FLOW,,,,,,,,,AND WORDPLAYS


MC UR GOOD NICE PUNCHES AND FLOW

USE PERSONALS AND WORDPLAYS

DEN U'LL GET BETTA

~PEACE~

V-EX FOR BETTA PUNCHES AND GOOD WORDPLAYS

lol uppin this battle for more votes !

anyone else gonna vote? like seriously vote fags!

Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~

ExClusive
had attempt punches dat were koo
had a nice flow lil vocab but ur
structure needs to be fixed overall
nice verse

MC_PHELA
simple verse need to add metas vocab punches
and wordplay 2 ya flow if u wanna win nice
structure dough keep battlin

This was feedback posted for MC_PHELA
 

i just want to see da polls...thats all...

Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~

shit hands down it goes to ex,
the structure was better, flow was nicer, punches hit harer
and vocabulary, well nc needs to read a dictionary